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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 19,936 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
remote disposal Do south and north go on as east and west, extend forever? ...or have both an end? “removed our sins as far as east from west” God has not said, “as far as north from south…” What diff’rence does that make? To see, just go due south. © Daniel J Ricketts 17 July 2005 QUOTE original Do south and north go on as east and west, extend indefinitely . . . never end? “removed our sins as far as east from west” God has not said, “as far as north from south…” What diff’rence does that make? To see, just go due south. ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Hi Daniel! :wave:
Another fab rictameter! My one suggestion for you to ponder: indefinitely . . . never end? How about" indefinitely . . . where they end? Great use of first and last line! ~Cleo :pharoah: ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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JustDaniel remote disposal Jul 18 05, 08:29 
Cathy Hi Daniel!
I don't think I'd want to ... Jul 18 05, 16:13 jgdittier Dear Daniel,
You've a talent for all varieties... Jul 18 05, 16:26 JLY Daniel,
I enjoyed the message you skillfully purve... Jul 19 05, 11:09 Toumai Hi, Daniel
This one has lost me .... south? Ameri... Jul 19 05, 12:26 Jox Hi Daniel,
I'm perplexed in the same way Fran... Jul 19 05, 12:45 Nina Hi Daniel
Make that 3 perplexed readers.
... Jul 19 05, 12:53 JustDaniel a quick note to Fran, Nina and James:
Part of the... Jul 19 05, 13:31 Nina Hi Daniel
urmm no, I'm still none the wiser. ... Jul 19 05, 13:49 JustDaniel Hmmm...
The answer to the riddle: White; it's... Jul 19 05, 13:59 Nina Hi Daniel
I'm afraid I'm still feeling ra... Jul 19 05, 14:14 JustDaniel You're by no means dense, my friend.
I'm ... Jul 19 05, 14:26 Nina Hi Daniel
Thanks for your patience.
LOL persiste... Jul 19 05, 14:45 Jox Hi Daniel...
Thanks very much for your efforts at... Jul 19 05, 15:39 Arnfinn Ha Daniel my Friend.
First let me say a delightfu... Jul 20 05, 06:56 JustDaniel QUOTE(larrysgirl5548 @ July 18 2005, 17:13)Hi... Jul 20 05, 07:08 JustDaniel QUOTE(jgdittier @ July 18 2005, 17:26)Dear Da... Jul 20 05, 07:10 JustDaniel QUOTE(JLY @ July 19 2005, 12:09)Daniel,
I enj... Jul 20 05, 07:15 JustDaniel QUOTE(Nina @ July 19 2005, 15:45)Hi Daniel
T... Jul 20 05, 07:20 JustDaniel QUOTE(Jox @ July 19 2005, 16:39)Hi Daniel...
... Jul 20 05, 07:35 JustDaniel QUOTE(Arnfinn @ July 20 2005, 07:56)Ha Daniel... Jul 20 05, 07:38 
JustDaniel Thanks so much, Lori.
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