Dear Lori,
Here is my version, with acks to Jox and Nina :
Hello from mosaicmusings.net.
Lots is happening here at Mosaic Musings. We have re-designed poetry forums, instigated some new awards, run several competitions, and started working on ebooks, amongst many other routine and special activities.
I've noticed that you don't seem to have posted recently. Under our new membership system, that makes you a "Bronze" - those who've been inactive for six months.
We really don't want to lose you, and would like to invite you back to active posting, critting and competing on MM again.
When you do post, your membership will automatically be upgraded to Silver, and who knows, you could be a Gold in a very short time.
If there is a reason you feel unable/unwilling to return, please write to me in confidence, and I'll try to help. I'd certainly like to see you here again, helping to shape the ongoing developments at mosaicmusings.net.
Love Lori Kantor Founder (or whatever title you use)
Lori, I think it important that this is a PERSONAL letter from you, not the other, which is more like a form letter.
I don't know if you have the time, but if you managed to mention a poem or piece the person had up as something that really struck you, then that would make it really personal. Perhaps you could ask another member to do that research if you are too busy ?
Love Alan
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