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  Apr 18 05, 20:14
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On The Mountain
This craggy faced mountain propelled up from the millennia, striped with dark layers, bold cliffs obscured history, locked in place. Impregnated with fossils, remnants of lost life yielding up ancient thoughts, still… so dormant it stands. Paleo clues, hidden bone fragments a few small creatures, inhabit now clouds almost touching my fingertips misting ever so lightly. Climbed this peak exploring, hoping, curious : Holding… an empty hourglass, looking for the sand of time. |
  
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May 3 05, 05:16
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
I remember this one Lar.
 I enjoyed it even more this time 'round!  ~Cleo :pharoah2 ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Zeus˛ On The Mountain Apr 18 05, 20:14 
Toumai Hi Larry,
What a powerful tale of a mountain. I l... Apr 19 05, 01:35 Jox Hi Larry,
Well done!
I agree with Fran's... Apr 19 05, 02:09 Zeus˛ Hi Fran,
this was a piece I wrote last year, duri... Apr 19 05, 06:38 Zeus˛ Hi James,
Shall we go mountain climbing?
Maybe w... Apr 19 05, 06:39 Aggiel Hi Larry,
So happy to bump into this master piece... Apr 27 05, 23:41 Zeus˛ Hi Aggie,
Thanks for your kind comments. Ready to ... Apr 29 05, 03:07 Aggiel QUOTE (Zeus˛ @ April 29 2005, 04:07)Hi Aggie,... May 2 05, 18:51 Nina Hi Larry
This poem was a delight to read. I... May 3 05, 06:33 Jox Hi Larry,
Speaking as one of the most recent "new... May 3 05, 06:47 Aphrodite Hey Larry~
How are you doing? This is such a re... May 28 05, 12:41 Zeus˛ Lori, Nina, Jox, Lindi,
Thank you for your warm c... Jun 4 05, 05:24 JLY Larry,
I just got around to reading this one and I... Jun 4 05, 06:34 
Siren Hey Larry,
You have some great imagery here, but ... Jun 10 05, 19:36 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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