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Cybele
post Apr 6 05, 06:58
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AGING GRACEFULLY



I’m past me sell-by date, I know;
Me steps don’t spring,
Me cheeks don’t glow
and I have noticed every day
me toes are getting farther away
when I try to touch ‘em.

But I can choose the clothes I wear
from market stalls
~ and who would care?
Me navel piercing looks its best
beneath me lovely thermal vest
when chill  winds  blow.

Me stockings and me lacy garters
no longer grace me lower quarters,
But rest in drawers in bright arrays.
reminders of me past hey-days
as a dolly bird.

Me hot pants and me knee-high boots
peroxide hair with its darker roots,
are now remembered with deep affection
along with me favourite Abba collection
in stereo on 45s.

Still in me heart there burns a fire
of girlish glee and sweet desire’
and love of life at any stage,
increased with every turning page
of me five year diary.


(All rights reserved by Grace Galton as an unpublished poem)




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- Cybele   AGING GRACEFULLY   Apr 6 05, 06:58
- - Jox   Hi Grace, Thank you... Well done! I’m dashing...   Apr 6 05, 07:57
- - Jox   Hi Grace, I've transferred my comment here an...   Apr 6 05, 08:35
- - JustDaniel   Just passing through for the moment, Grace, but on...   Apr 6 05, 08:55
- - jgdittier   Dear Grace, Comments from the other side of the po...   Apr 6 05, 10:35
- - JLY   Grace, I enjoyed your witty, humorous journey of c...   Apr 6 05, 11:31
- - Nina   Hi Grace This a wonderful light-hearted look at t...   Apr 6 05, 14:00
- - Toumai   Dear Grace, ROFL! I love this - and it would...   Apr 6 05, 14:59
- - Eisa   Oooh! -- Dear Grace, ... this one has made ...   Apr 6 05, 18:50
- - Cybele   Good morning James,   Thank you for your very de...   Apr 7 05, 02:21
- - Cybele   Good morning Daniel, Lovely to see you here.   ...   Apr 7 05, 02:29
- - Cybele   Good morning Ron,   QUOTEDear Grace, Comment...   Apr 7 05, 03:04
- - Cybele   Hello John, QUOTEGrace, I enjoyed your witty, h...   Apr 7 05, 09:19
- - Arnfinn   How are you Grace? You transferred the experiment...   Apr 8 05, 05:10
- - JustDaniel   I'll have to try one of these little gems. ...   Apr 8 05, 15:26
- - Billydo   Hi Grace - Aging Gracefully I am as well, because...   Apr 9 05, 04:37
- - Don   I’m past me sell by date, I know: Me steps don’t s...   Apr 10 05, 17:14
- - Cybele   G'day Arn,   Sorry ta keep yer waitin fer an...   Apr 11 05, 01:17
- - Cybele   Good morning Nina, I am pleased this raised a lau...   Apr 11 05, 01:28
- - Cybele   Hello Fran, QUOTEDear Grace, ROFL! I lov...   Apr 11 05, 01:37
- - Cybele   Good morning Mike, How lovely to see you here.   ...   Apr 11 05, 01:44
- - Toumai     Sorry, Grace - just too lazy to put the colons ...   Apr 11 05, 01:45
- - Cybele   Hi Fran,  You are a mere child Fran. Plenty of...   Apr 11 05, 09:42
- - jgdittier   Dear Grace, I suspected your verse couldn't be...   Apr 14 05, 08:44
- - Cybele   Good morning Ron, Have just returned from Spain a...   Apr 20 05, 03:53
- - Cybele   Good morning Don,   Sorry not to have got back ...   Apr 20 05, 04:01
- -   Dear Grace and Ron, Grace, perhaps the most famou...   Apr 20 05, 04:29
- - Zeus²   Hi Grace, Enjoyed this trip down memory lane. What...   Apr 20 05, 06:22
- - Cybele   Good morning Larry,   Lovely to hear from you. ...   Apr 22 05, 08:56
- - jgdittier   Dear Grace, I'm not sure what to say here othe...   Apr 28 05, 16:36
- - Cybele   Good morning Ron, QUOTEDear Grace, I'm not su...   Apr 29 05, 01:58
- - Don   Congratulation, Grace, on winning a wizard award. ...   May 1 05, 14:29
- - Jox   Hi Grace, Many congratulations on your Wizard. J...   May 1 05, 17:45
- - AMETHYST   Congratuations Grace, I just noticed this and fo...   May 1 05, 18:10
- - Cybele   Good morning Lori,  :tut: What a lovely sur...   May 2 05, 01:56
- - Cybele   Good morning Don, Thank you so much for your ve...   May 2 05, 01:57
- - Cybele   Good morning James, Thank you for your kind wor...   May 2 05, 02:01
- - Cybele   [b]Good mornin Liz, QUOTECongratuations Grace, ...   May 2 05, 02:05
- - Nina   Hi Grace Congratulations on winning a wizard awar...   May 2 05, 15:36
- - Cybele   Hello Nina, Many thanks for your kind words.   May 4 05, 02:41

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