 Cryptic Chrysalis, Revised 01 May ~ thanks Liz! |
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Cryptic Chrysalis
Days are made longer by a longing to belong... Dusk turns detestable in shadowy guise, left to rot in a cryptic chrysalis... Out of the wakening an epiphanous light proffers in kind; wings widen to nurture faculties unfocused… only to be traumatized by truth veiled in fallacious vows. © 2005 Lorraine M Kanter ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Apr 24 05, 18:26
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,547 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Jeddah, Saudi Arabia Member No.: 13 Real Name: Daniah Writer of: Poetry |
Hey Lori,
Reading this made me feel a kind of barrenness. It's something different from you and I love it. It is so great to read you again. Love Dani ······· ·······Happiness is a journey, not a destination.
"A good book is not read and forgotten. It lingers in the mind of the reader, reshaping thoughts, asking new questions, revisiting ancient ones." MM Award Winner |
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Cleo_Serapis Cryptic Chrysalis Apr 14 05, 18:49 
Nina Hi Lori
There is a sad despairing feel to this po... Apr 15 05, 01:07 Dear Nina,
Days are made longer
by a longing to b... Apr 15 05, 02:00 Nina Hi Alan
I think the long - in 3 different way, is... Apr 15 05, 02:41 Dear Nina,
"you are probably right. It was ... Apr 15 05, 04:28 Jox Hi Lori,
This is more an appreciation, than a cri... Apr 15 05, 04:35 Ephiny Hello Lori
This is beautifully written, and as ... Apr 15 05, 12:26 Billydo Hi Lori
James suggested that I crit away and not ... Apr 17 05, 03:02 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Nina @ April 15 2005, 02:07)Hi Lori
Th... Apr 17 05, 12:08 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Alan @ April 15 2005, 03:00)Dear Nina,
... Apr 17 05, 12:14 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Jox @ April 15 2005, 05:35)Hi Lori,
Th... Apr 17 05, 13:03 Jox Hi Lori...
Sorry about your thumb - nasty. (Was i... Apr 17 05, 13:08 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Ephiny @ April 15 2005, 13:26)Hello Lor... Apr 17 05, 13:12 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Billydo @ April 17 2005, 04:02)Hi Lori
... Apr 17 05, 13:22 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Jox @ April 17 2005, 14:08)[b]Hi Lori..... Apr 17 05, 13:25 Toumai Hi Cleo,
This poem made me very uncomfortable whe... Apr 21 05, 00:56 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Toumai @ April 21 2005, 01:56)Hi Cleo,
... Apr 24 05, 18:50 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Siren @ April 24 2005, 19:26)Hey Lori,
... Apr 24 05, 18:54 AMETHYST Wow Lori,
This is a very dramatic and powerful p... Apr 25 05, 20:50 Cybele Dear Lori,
This one appeared while I was on holid... Apr 26 05, 04:25 Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(AMETHYST @ April 25 2005, 21:50)Wow Lor... May 1 05, 12:58 
Cleo_Serapis QUOTE(Cybele @ April 26 2005, 05:25)Dear Lori... May 1 05, 13:04 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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