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Eisa
post Apr 6 05, 19:01
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Real Name: Eira Needham
Writer of: Poetry
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Lover's Locket ( new title for The Lucky Locket)


They clung  in passion -- long embraces,
sadly kissed goodbye while tears
of desperation stained their faces;
coming battles fuelled their fears.
He wore her gift against his chest
amidst the trench filled battle zones.
She soldiered on, although depressed;
his destination was unknown.

The lucky bean-shaped locket hung
upon it’s chain, beneath his shirt.
A sudden burst of bullets stunned
him, threw him down -- almost unhurt.
One bullet nearly killed him, struck
him near his heart but hit the charm
and ricocheted -- no stroke of luck.
Her love had kept him safe from harm.

The treasured locket’s kept inside
my `reminiscence box’ today,  
inherited with heart-felt pride
when my dear father passed away.
His parents lived this touching tale
of love, the seedling family tree;  
their golden heirloom still prevails --
a keepsake genealogy.






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post Apr 7 05, 14:41
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Hi Eisa,

What a wonderful tale. a few milimetres of symbolic love saving him from death, and written so smoothly.

I do hope you'll keep a copy of the poem in that 'reminiscence box', too?

Fran
 
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- Eisa   Lover's Locket   Apr 6 05, 19:01
- -   Dear Snow, Although this could be "a poet's v...   Apr 6 05, 22:26
- - Nina   Hi Eisa What a lovely story you tell in this poem...   Apr 7 05, 06:47
- - Cybele   Hello Eisa, Well you know this romantic tale wo...   Apr 7 05, 07:36
- - JustDaniel   Greetings again, Snow! Since I've already...   Apr 8 05, 16:20
- - Eisa   Hello Alan     Yes -- this really is my family hi...   Apr 8 05, 17:11
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Nina @ April 07 2005, 07:47)Hi Eisa Wh...   Apr 8 05, 17:17
- - Eisa   Hello Grace  :wave: That is so true -- no l...   Apr 8 05, 17:24
- - Eisa   Hi Fran   Yes it is a great tale and one I hope ...   Apr 8 05, 17:30
- - Eisa   Hi Daniel  :wave: Good to see you again on ...   Apr 8 05, 17:35
- - Billydo   Hi Snow What a delightful poem and fabulous story...   Apr 9 05, 04:32
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Billydo @ April 09 2005, 05:32)Hi Snow ...   Apr 14 05, 19:25
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Snow on your Mod Choice award winning til...   Sep 13 05, 18:11
- - Eisa   Oh wow Lori! -- I'm away for a while and I...   Sep 13 05, 18:46
- - Cleo_Serapis   Well deserved Snow! I hope so too! Look forward ...   Sep 13 05, 18:53
- - Cathy   Congratulations Snow on your Mod Choice Award...   Sep 13 05, 19:40
- - Nina   Hi Snow Well done for your award for this piece. ...   Sep 13 05, 23:54
- - Toumai   Congratulations, Snow A wonderful poem and well ...   Sep 14 05, 00:40
- - Arnfinn   Hi Eisa, This type of poem is totally right up m...   Sep 14 05, 03:49
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ Sep. 13 2005, 19:53)Well...   Sep 14 05, 17:26
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Cathy @ Sep. 13 2005, 20:40)Congratulat...   Sep 14 05, 17:28
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Nina @ Sep. 14 2005, 00:54)Hi Snow Wel...   Sep 14 05, 17:30
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Toumai @ Sep. 14 2005, 01:40)Congratula...   Sep 14 05, 17:31
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Arnfinn @ Sep. 14 2005, 04:49)Hi Eisa, ...   Sep 14 05, 17:33
- - AMETHYST   Hey Snow, CONGRATULATIONS!  :ent:  Thi...   Sep 14 05, 23:52
- - jgdittier   Dear Snow, I'm late getting here but right wit...   Sep 17 05, 06:58
- - Cleo_Serapis   Congrats Snow on your wizard award winning tile! ...   Sep 25 05, 06:33
- - Nina   Congratulations Snow on winning a wizard for this ...   Sep 25 05, 07:27
- - Jox   Well done Eisa for your Wizardry and the ensuing a...   Sep 25 05, 07:32
- - Cathy   LOL  I'm back!   Congratulation...   Sep 25 05, 09:32
- - Eisa   QUOTE(AMETHYST @ Sep. 15 2005, 00:52) Hey S...   Oct 1 05, 13:57
- - Eisa   QUOTE(jgdittier @ Sep. 17 2005, 07:58)Dear Sn...   Oct 1 05, 13:59
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ Sep. 25 2005, 07:33)Cong...   Oct 1 05, 14:02
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Nina @ Sep. 25 2005, 08:27)Congratulati...   Oct 1 05, 14:04
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Jox @ Sep. 25 2005, 08:32)Well done Eis...   Oct 1 05, 14:05
- - Eisa   QUOTE(Cathy @ Sep. 25 2005, 10:32)LOL  I...   Oct 1 05, 14:07

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