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  Aug 9 04, 08:48
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Crown Jewels Award
 Celtic Castle Designs Shrouded Echoes, A midnight luminescence veils the sea, it twinkles, bobbing in reflective rays. Celestial constellations in ballet as diamonds pas de duex in blackened tea. The moonlight skims across the crested waves... a phosphorescent glow of rippling foam, beneath the creatures effortlessly roam uncounted depths of salty water graves. Now through a liquid skyline sunrays peek, the sea’s so calm, with not a wave in sight. As wispy clouds disperse in wingless flight the day is new with glory that will speak. Aside a piece of driftwood floats on by, a gull was perched there, hesitant to fly. |
  
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Apr 5 05, 18:47
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Congrat on your Crown Jewels award winning tile Larry!
   Well done! ~Cleo 
·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Zeus˛ Shrouded Echoes Aug 9 04, 08:48 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Larry! :knight:
This is absolutely stun... Aug 15 04, 08:06 Taita Hey Zeus,
This was a pleasure to read for some of... Oct 3 04, 20:42 Nefertiti Ah, Zeus,
You have me swooning with your mastery ... Mar 24 05, 21:48 Aphrodite Hello Larry~
This is an absolutely sparkling piec... Mar 26 05, 15:17 Zeus˛ DRB,
thanks for your comments and stopping by.
Lar... Mar 29 05, 11:30 Zeus˛ Miss Nef,
ready to be swept away huh!!... Mar 29 05, 11:32 Zeus˛ Hi Lindi,
Thanks for the wonderful comments.
I mu... Mar 29 05, 11:34 Ivy Rose This is a brilliant work. Dazzling imagery and fan... Apr 3 05, 20:17 Zeus˛ Hi Sharon,
Thank you for your nice comments. This ... Apr 5 05, 14:06 Jox Hi Larry,
I'm delighted that you have an awar... Apr 5 05, 18:52 Toumai Hi Larry,
This is very beautiful. Congratulations... Apr 6 05, 02:49 Zeus˛ Lor,
my humble thanks for the award.
Hugs
Larry Apr 6 05, 17:17 Zeus˛ James,
appreciate your kind words and comments.
Th... Apr 6 05, 17:19 
Zeus˛ Fran,
Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Larry Apr 6 05, 17:20 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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