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Mosaic Master

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From: Massachusetts
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Real Name: Lori Kanter
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
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Jan 15 05, 18:42
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Dear Jox,
You are very kind to say that I am concerned for others. Nope, if I have to figure through this : If your poem has end rhymes and/or is of a formal poetic style then R & M is the forum..
If your poem has no rhyming end lines or metrical unit (like a quatrain or couplet) and various line lengths and stanza lengths, then it would be a FV post....
every time I want to post, I will be in confusion. Yes, I can sit down and figure it out, but that is hardly simple. It will be a barrier, and it will stop some newer people "daring" in case they get it wrong. Witness those who say they never venture into Socrates, they don't think they could do hard crit, or possibly, unspoken, they don't want hard crit themselves.
I think we are very fortunate on MM to have developed such a "creative" and "caring" crit style that people dare to be exposed to it. If we start expecting people to analyse what they are about to put up, including ME, that is an extra barrier to simplicity.
I would probably for safety simply throw everything into the FV one, in a sense, anything goes, there, so everything goes there !
I admire Lori, who DOES know the difference, and you, who has no problem, you only do FV. But if I look at the last 5 poems I wrote, I'd spend several minutes working out what they were, other than "the best words, in their best order" for effective communication.
Love Alan
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Cleo_Serapis Forum Changes to Poetry Category Jan 15 05, 10:04 Toumai Hi Cleo,
MM certainly is a little daunting at fir... Jan 15 05, 11:17 Jox Hi,
Scientific Poem Competition -
Sorry about th... Jan 15 05, 11:26 Dear Cleo,
Suddenly, I KNOW why MM site navigatio... Jan 15 05, 13:50 Nina Hi Cleo
It does seem a good idea to combine some ... Jan 15 05, 16:17 Jox Hi all & Lori, Alan, Nina,
The division into form... Jan 15 05, 16:29 Cleo_Serapis Thanks all so far for your responses!
I've also h... Jan 15 05, 17:06 Jox Lori...
That makes things simpler. A slight probl... Jan 15 05, 17:17 Cleo_Serapis Hello James.
Yes - that seems fair - partial rhym... Jan 15 05, 17:44 Jox Sounds excellent.
Why not restrict "starting" pos... Jan 15 05, 17:50 Dear Cleo and Jox,
I'm bothered by making pos... Jan 15 05, 17:54 Jox Hi Alan, actually that was a quote from Lori's... Jan 15 05, 18:01 Dear Jox,
My point in essence :
Do I want simple... Jan 15 05, 18:05 Cleo_Serapis Potential NEW forum names for FV poetry:
Hadrian'... Jan 15 05, 18:05 Jox Hi Alan,
Sorry - yes, I understood your point ve... Jan 15 05, 18:09 Cleo_Serapis Oops!
Now you two have been busy posting whilst I ... Jan 15 05, 18:11 Nina Hi Lori and James
I'm with Alan on this. ... Jan 15 05, 18:15 Jox Well, yes that does seem simple sense to me, Lori ... Jan 15 05, 18:15 Jox Hi Nina.
I like the idea of simplicity, too. But ... Jan 15 05, 18:21 Cleo_Serapis Hello Nina!
Hmmm - I will ask Eric and Ron to ... Jan 15 05, 18:33 Jox Hi Alan,
Well I do sometimes makes poor attempts ... Jan 15 05, 18:48 Cleo_Serapis Hi Alan!
I am going to use a few of your poems ... Jan 15 05, 18:53 Cleo_Serapis Another example is with my poem "A Visitation to V... Jan 15 05, 19:15 jgdittier Dear All,
I was a "cousin" at POEMS place, now def... Jan 15 05, 21:24 Toumai I'm enjoying MM so much - a friendly, helpful ... Jan 16 05, 04:35 Jox Hi Ron,
I think you'll find there are a lot o... Jan 16 05, 05:09 Cleo_Serapis I think it will fall into place once we start the ... Jan 16 05, 08:22 Jox Hi all,
I think the information / definitions whi... Jan 16 05, 09:16 Dear Cleo,
Experienced as I might be in writing v... Jan 16 05, 09:17 Cleo_Serapis Hi Alan. :rainbow:
I DO appreciate your wo... Jan 16 05, 09:58 Cleo_Serapis Slight name change on Hermia's forum to Herme's (t... Feb 26 05, 09:51
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