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Aug 16 03, 17:17
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This one has been polished on another site, but I felt it was appropriate to post here, because it's full of Greek gods of the skies. Uranus ... Greek god of the heavens Nyx … Greek goddess of the night Selene … Greek goddess of the moon Gaia ... Greek goddess of the earth Helios … Greek god of the sun
I have recently revised this again with a new title.
Heaven's Vault Uranus’ heavens blaze with lustrous lights when clouds abate. I marvel at the sight of diamantes jewelling the skies; as sentries watch with Nyx’ eternal eyes, Selene outstretched illuming arms to guide our footsteps through the dark. A slumbrous tide embraces Gaia’s realm, while Nyx enshrouds her sequined tapestry, with misted clouds.
When Nyx dispels her shadows I awake, and Helios’ gold chariot now breaks the dawn. His journey yields a fervid glow, to scorch and thaw the glacial winter snow. The horses gallop, leaving clouds behind; diurnal skies are heated for mankind.
He journeys on as temperature declines, then night’s bespangled wealth begins to shine. Selene bestows her light for Nyx to stroke the rhinestones that adorn her velvet cloak.
Black Velvet and Diamonds
I gazed towards a cloudless sky that night and felt aglow, to see a vivid sight. For night was sprinkled with bold winking eyes as diamonds dazzled blackened velvet skies. Selene stretched out her arms of light to guide, diffused in darkness till the day. A tide of slumber covered me in dreams of Nyx, nocturnal goddess of Chaotic mix.
The night recedes with dreams and I awake, when Helios rides his chariot to break the dawn. This journey swells his fervid glow, to scorch and thaw the glacial winter’s snow. His horses gallop leaving clouds behind and warms the azure sky for all mankind.
As day time ebbs, the fierce sun chills. I pine for those nocturnal goddess jewels to shine. Selene illuminates the dark, for Nyx to stroke the diamonds scattered on her velvet cloak.
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Aug 30 03, 07:15
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Your imagery and feel/mood to this one sings! 
Nicely done Snow!
Thanks for adding a tile in style to the Mosaic! :dance:
~Cleo :pharoah:
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Eisa Heaven's Vault Aug 16 03, 17:17 Zeus² Snow,
as Zeus, leader of all gods, I must say, you... Aug 16 03, 17:42 Aphrodite QUOTE (Eisa @ Aug. 16 2003, 17:17)This one ha... Aug 17 03, 18:56 Eisa QUOTE (Zeus² @ Aug. 16 2003, 17:42)Snow,
as Z... Aug 18 03, 07:33 Eisa Hi Aphrodite
Thank you so much for you lovely com... Aug 18 03, 07:37 Hi, I really like this one. Andrea Aug 29 03, 23:05 Brahms Fully enjoyed for the ease of travel through
from... Aug 30 03, 00:01 Eisa QUOTE (Andrea @ Aug. 29 2003, 23:05)Hi, I rea... Aug 30 03, 13:25 Eisa QUOTE (Brahms @ Aug. 30 2003, 00:01)Fully enj... Aug 30 03, 13:29 Eisa QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Aug. 30 2003, 07:15) ... Aug 30 03, 13:36 Don Lovely poem Eisa,
Since you envoked goddess Nyx, ... Aug 30 03, 18:48 Eisa QUOTE (Don @ Aug. 30 2003, 18:48)Lovely poem ... Sep 5 03, 03:11
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