 Mystical Night of Ebony Skies, by Briana |
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 Mar 16 04, 19:05
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Hello MM friends. My daughter, Briana, (12~yrs.~old) just wrote this poem for fun. (I swear, it is her poem!!!!!)
 I thought it was very sweet and wanted to share it with you. Mystical Night of Ebony Skies Mystical night of ebony skies tumbles and turns, falling, thunder and laughter both collide, mystical night of ebony skies. Roaring and weeping cries of sorrow, doubts of wonder, regrets for tomorrow, Mystical night of ebony skies tumbles and turns, falling, thunder and laughter both collide, mystical night of ebony skies. ©Briana Balboni 2004 ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Mar 16 04, 20:31
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Whoa Briana! :pharoah2
Well, you certainly take after your mom in the artistic realms!  This is FAB! I like the repetition - it works very well in this piece, not to mention the metaphors. I think of the great Greek gods arguing amongst themselves high among the stars above. Awesome! ~Cleo 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Aphrodite Mystical Night of Ebony Skies Mar 16 04, 19:05 
Hi Briana:
This is an absolutely great poem. You... Mar 17 04, 17:27 Aphrodite QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Mar. 16 2004, 19:31)Who... Mar 18 04, 17:07 Aphrodite QUOTE (Shava @ Mar. 17 2004, 16:27)Hi Briana:... Mar 18 04, 17:09 Taita Seems like you have a talent on your hands here. T... Oct 3 04, 20:44 Cathy This is a really great poem. You have real talent... Oct 15 04, 15:55 Aphrodite QUOTE (Taita @ Oct. 03 2004, 21:44)Seems like... Jan 23 05, 17:12 Aphrodite QUOTE (larrysgirl5548 @ Oct. 15 2004, 16:55)T... Jan 23 05, 17:13 jgdittier Dear Bri,
The sages say one should make best use o... Jan 23 05, 17:37 Aphrodite QUOTE (jgdittier @ Jan. 23 2005, 17:37)Dear B... Jan 29 05, 10:55 Siren Oh wow Briana,
When I saw the title I just had to... Jun 10 05, 20:09 
Aphrodite QUOTE (Siren @ June 10 2005, 21:09)Oh wow Bri... Jun 17 05, 20:01 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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