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 Nov 21 04, 09:28
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 Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 1,250 Joined: 2-August 03 From: USA Member No.: 7 Writer of: Poetry  |
Alluring globs of decadent
dressings undress my sensation’s control. Succulent turkey smells waft delicately airing enticing aroma, tempting an abundance of delicacies eager for devouring. Filling pie, cheery fruitful flavors of contentment satisfy, while digested gladdened tidings reveal another year of thankful blessings. ©Linda Balboni 2002 ·······  ·······"Imagination is more important than knowledge and encircles the world"
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Nov 21 04, 10:47
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
 Oh boy! It's gotten HOT in here! :grinning: Love it Lindi! May I offer an alternate ending? How about: thankful dressings instead of thankful blessings? Just an idea.... to waft over.... :turkey: Great job Lindi! ~Cleo :pharoah: ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner       |
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Aphrodite Thankful Blessings Nov 21 04, 09:28 
JLY Linda,
You have whet my appetite and it is not yet... Nov 21 04, 10:47 Morgan le Fay Hi Lindi!
Boy, have you got me salivating for... Nov 22 04, 12:59 Aphrodite QUOTE(JLY @ Nov. 21 2004, 10:47)Linda,
You ha... Nov 22 04, 19:32 AMETHYST Hey Lindi,
Ah ah... I quite enjoyed this... and ... Nov 23 04, 04:55 Aphrodite QUOTE(Cleo_Serapis @ Nov. 21 2004, 10:47) Oh... Nov 24 04, 18:31 Aphrodite QUOTE(Morgan le Fay @ Nov. 22 2004, 12:59)Hi ... Nov 24 04, 18:34 Aphrodite QUOTE(AMETHYST @ Nov. 23 2004, 04:55)Hey Lind... Nov 24 04, 18:36 Arnfinn Hi Lindi
Hey, the first stanza: alluring, decad... Nov 25 04, 05:18 Ephiny Hello Lindi
Unfortunately we don't really h... Nov 26 04, 07:09 Cathy Now I'm hungry all over again! :jest... Nov 26 04, 16:28 Aphrodite QUOTE(Arnfinn @ Nov. 25 2004, 05:18)Hi Lindi ... Nov 27 04, 08:23 Aphrodite QUOTE(Ephiny @ Nov. 26 2004, 07:09)Hello Lind... Nov 27 04, 08:25 
Aphrodite QUOTE(larrysgirl5548 @ Nov. 26 2004, 16:28)No... Nov 27 04, 08:42 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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