A Second Chance, ...at life, family, friends Options

[JLY]

Faery Award

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A SECOND CHANCE

The towering pine trees became ever more stately,
thanks to a bounty of golden sunshine and gentle rain.
Pruning the old brittle limbs would make them seem shapely,
and the pinewoods could look healthy and trim once again.

Smelling the beauty of the pines from my perch up high,
I had a strange feeling that something possibly could go awry.
Those thoughts of uncertainly were casually brushed aside
as I felt secure for that one moment in the treetop I did reside.

It was dreary and sullen on that fateful day in August of 1998.
In the distant horizon was a northeasterly zephyr
blanketing the sky with a tinge of color the shade of slate
and for a brief moment, my tenure on earth became just a blur.

The breezes that blew were no longer so gentle
precipitating my fall to the ground as solely accidental.
While lying entwined with the branches I had just clipped
I screamed aloud for anyone whose hand I could grip.

A host of angels hovered over and greeted me
at a time when my body and soul were set to be free.
Visions of my family and friends glowed like bright lights,
as God's little attendants reached down to tug me off into flight.

A solitary guardian savior heard my hysteric and desperate pleas;
she opened up my eyes to the wonders I had yet to foresee.
Vowing my heart would be generous till my last dying gasp,
my divine messenger carefully released me from her grasp.

In some strange way my aborted journey to the hereafter
was for me an epiphany that encouraged me to envision
one’s lifetime should be reveled in and filled with laughter,
showing compassion to others would be my finest decision.

My renewed spirit has given me many precious blessings.
I’ve learned to love living with all its marvelous trimmings.
I thank that sacred being for asking me to dance,
forever thankful for being bestowed a second chance.

[Ephiny]

Hello John

This is so uplifting and beautifully written, not only the central story but the details you include, the descriptions, the trees

ever more stately,
thanks to a bounty of golden sunshine and gentle rain.

You describe the event so poetically..the fall itself, what you saw happening around you and finally the effects and consequent feelings and emotions.  I really love these lines

she opened up my eyes to the wonders I had yet to foresee.
Vowing my heart would be generous till my last dying gasp,
my divine messenger carefully released me from her grasp.


This is one quick suggestion if you wanted to think about it

one’s lifetime should be reveled in and filled with laughter,
showing compassion to others would be my finest decision.

Really enjoyed reading this..you have made this glimpse into another world so vivid and colourful :pharoah2