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 Feb 24 04, 23:36
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Why, Night?
Why, night, must you entrap me with your sickening hug of coldness as I cry? Why, night, do you hold me in your ghastly grip of loneliness? Your touch has failed me, holding no comfort. Release me, for I want you no more. I would rather grasp his frigid hand and wipe away my own tears. |
  
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Jul 31 04, 02:11
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
Hi,
Nothing can create fear to the extream as darkness. Add a bit of depression and loneliness. Open your eyes wide and let you thoughts sink into the solitude of silence. Nothing... Very stark. Arnie 
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blondie Why, Night? Feb 24 04, 23:36 
codger Yes indeed--night can be foe as well as friend.
Ni... Feb 25 04, 10:40 blondie Dear Gerry,
Thanks so much for reading!
I ap... Feb 26 04, 12:13 JLY At first glance, your title intrigued me , so when... Feb 26 04, 13:08 Zeus˛ Amy,
great how you expressed being caught between ... Feb 26 04, 16:57 blondie Hi Larry. :)
Thanks so much for your gracious com... Feb 29 04, 18:07 Siren Amy,
WOW! This is impressive... I adore it..... Mar 1 04, 03:54 Athena Ohhhhh Amy! After too many deaths in my ... Mar 1 04, 05:21 blondie Hi Daniah!
So glad you enjoyed this one. ... Mar 1 04, 12:03 blondie Dear Dolly,
HI there! Thanks so much fo... Mar 1 04, 12:07 recherche hello blondie finally had time to read some poems... Jul 25 04, 15:18 JustDaniel Hey Amy!
Your lines are powerful, as evidence... Jul 26 04, 05:05 blondie Kevin and Daniel,
Thanks, Kevin, for "bumping" th... Jul 26 04, 15:03 Cybele Hello Amy, :sun:
Such a powerful poem, por... Jul 27 04, 10:22 face great write, very expressive and powerful Jul 27 04, 14:47 Tao Amy,
Dear, dear, still suffering, you sweet...tha... Jul 29 04, 20:10 blondie Grace, Face, and Tao....
Thanks, friends, for sto... Jul 30 04, 13:52 
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