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 Egyptian  Posts: 427 Joined: 5-August 03 From: Oregon, USA Member No.: 8 Real Name: Dolly Writer of: Poetry  |
Hi Folks,
I've loved all your haikus so very much that after reading all of them again, I've decided to begin a SEPARATE thread for Interactive Haiku. So, please use this thread for the "train fashion haiku" and the initial haiku thread for standard haiku. Thanks so much, y'll!! How about attempting to write one a day for 15 or 30 days in a row? Anyone game to commit to this endeavor? I'll begin this thread: Weather is crazy .. how can anyone predict capricious nature © D R Harris - 28 Jan 2004 The next author will begin their haiku with "capricious nature". OK Everyone, let's goooooo!!!! 
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
This slimfast shake's GOOD
even better it'll be once poundage come off! ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
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Athena Haiku Train Jan 29 04, 01:27 
Dear Dolly
This may not be quite the direction th... Jan 29 04, 02:09 Athena Yes, Alan, absolutely! Wonderful!
That... Jan 29 04, 05:40 Dear Dolly
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In a rising cloud
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for a mourning wash
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into ... Feb 2 04, 00:38 JustDaniel waste-deep advice
next lie ~ float, don’t swim;
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hatch gnu ones daily
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party knew your sieve
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when you would be pieced
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b... Feb 8 04, 21:00 Athena How To Play
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by obeying all ... Feb 13 04, 01:49 Dear Dolly
"How To Play
Better pay light bill
by... Feb 13 04, 02:43 Athena Hahahahah Alan, you're funny! What in the... Feb 13 04, 03:19 Dear D
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Of has-been tallow
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we learn of peo... Feb 13 04, 23:40 Athena Very interesting haiku, Grace, dear! But... Feb 14 04, 05:26 Cybele Sorry Dolly :blush21:
This follows your hai... Feb 14 04, 05:33 Athena Believe it or Not
exaggerated
fantasies abound in... Feb 14 04, 05:33 Athena NO, NO, NO ... NOT NOW!! I've ju... Feb 14 04, 05:35 Dear Grace and Dolly
Well now, Grace has removed ... Feb 14 04, 05:36 Athena Me too!
Dolly Feb 14 04, 05:38 Cybele Whoops!
Trying again to get the thr... Feb 14 04, 05:40 Cybele Hi Dolly and Alan,
Well, having thoroughly messed... Feb 14 04, 06:03 Well, folks, I doubt if we can get any MORE intera... Feb 14 04, 06:11 JustDaniel QUOTE (Cybele @ Feb. 14 2004, 05:03)Hi Dolly ... Feb 16 04, 10:48 Athena Reality
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