Faded Layers, Wizard Award Winner Options

[Eisa]

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Celtic Castle Designs

Faded Layers


I frown at my reflection wistfully
and recognise my bloom’s become debris.
Instead, my mother gazes back; in truth,
maturity replaced my tender youth.
Soft silk has been exchanged for crinkled crepe
to shroud my inmost self. I can’t escape
from Time’s persistent pace, for she’s designed
this puckered faded fashion, so maligned.


Time’s fingers frayed my visage … I accept
the ravages she wreaked, for they reflect
life’s stormy waters, where no calm appears
to shape persona through tempestuous tears.
I rummage through the rustiness of life
to trace the winding tracks that turn to strife.
Determination’s pushed me to pursue
my problems, hiding battle scars from view.


As seasons change, I face them …  unafraid
of Time's relentless tides and facial raids.
Inside I may be bruised with wounds from war,
yet I’ve survived to stretch my wings and soar.
So mirror image, though you may displease
when dusty covers are removed; just ease
my faded layers back to look behind …
a stronger fabric shows … my mellow mind!

[Cleo_Serapis]

Hi Snow!  :sun:

I find this piece well crafted. The debate is interesting - perhaps one of the guys will open a thread in the Debate forum for further discussion?

Anyway, I've been meaning to critique, and will come back to do so!  :taco:

In the meanwhile, "Your piece is your own, and when you are comfortable with the results, that's all that matters in the end."

Hugs!

~Cleo