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 Jul 2 17, 20:09
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 18,832 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
... a specific response to Larry's fine sonnet, Not Alone in Hermes
Naughty Loan I too am so impressed to read your work; It seems that I've neglected reading here. So here I am and trouncing like a jerk, I leave the path and venture without fear of stepping on your feet or on some home of insects, vermin, birds or who knows what to wander off where'er my eyes may roam and run or play or simply rest my butt. A cautious step is something that I've not been taught, perhaps is now too late to learn. If I go on like this, will I be caught and sent away to somewhere I will burn forever for my lacking social skills and racking up so many hidden kills? © MLeeDickensson 23 June 2017 in response to Larry D. Jennings' Not Alone ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
You and Larry are certainly the sonneteers of MM, Daniel. This one is good fun! Enjoyed.
Eira ······· ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner        |
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JustDaniel Naughty Loan ** Jul 2 17, 20:09 
Ali zonak Very humorous, Daniel;
good clean fun. I might qu... Jul 3 17, 07:50 
JustDaniel QUOTE (Ali zonak @ Jul 3 17, 07:50 ) Very... Jul 6 17, 00:11 JustDaniel QUOTE (Eisa @ Jul 4 17, 17:23 ) You and L... Jul 6 17, 00:14 Larry Hi Daniel,
Yes, I did read, laugh at and enjoy yo... Jul 6 17, 09:25 JustDaniel ... and it's a joy to do so, Larry!
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