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 Dec 21 16, 15:42
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 Assyrian  Posts: 256 Joined: 2-November 15 From: Croydon, Surrey Member No.: 5,284 Real Name: Antony Glaser Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira Rhaposdy  |
I laughed from the window ledge,
a wadling Puffin walking down the busy street, wings covering eyes. He was lost unless he had planned this a thousand times, to espy the vanquished, those universal global warmers - the tombstone sayers of Acacia Avenue. There's too much of the wrong traffic daily debating those diesel fumes. ·······  ·······Imagination fires the soul, resolution the longing.
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Jan 4 17, 18:44
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
I enjoyed this Antony - just a few comments below.
I laughed from the window ledge, a wadling Puffin walking down the busy street, Perhaps it would be more concise to say a puffin waddling down the busy street. 2 'dd's in waddling wings covering eyes. He was lost unless he had planned this a thousand times, to espy the vanquished, those universal global warmers - the tombstone sayers of Acacia Avenue. There's too much of the wrong traffic daily debating those diesel fumes. Happy New Year Antony! Eira ······· ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
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greenwich Puffins equating misery Dec 21 16, 15:42 
greenwich Thank you for the review and a happy New Year to a... Jan 6 17, 13:53 
Psyche Hi Antony,
I laughed at the waddling puffin (with ... Jan 9 17, 00:10 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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