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 Dec 17 15, 09:17
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 Assyrian  Posts: 250 Joined: 1-November 15 Member No.: 5,282 Real Name: richard chase Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Rhapsody  |
Greetings arrive on gossamer wings
the bright length of the day at hand breath -- a birth -- joy within us sings round a parlor tree -- the piano grand. Oh how I wish -- and wish on it again the lord himself on this his natal day -- ah so many lonely centuries it’s been -- would return in the jolly man’s sleigh. |
  
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Dec 17 15, 19:25
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Oh I love this one! And yes - I will move it to the R&M forum and keep a link here so you can follow along.
 Cheers, ~Cleo 
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RC James Emily Dickinson at Christmastime Dec 17 15, 09:17 
JustDaniel Hey, Richard...
I was drawn in here by your Emily... Dec 17 15, 09:52 RC James Daniel - I placed it here because I paid no attent... Dec 17 15, 11:28 Eisa I love this one Richard!
I have no nits reall... Dec 19 15, 05:24 Maureen I love that first line - and even more so because ... Dec 26 15, 17:10 Psyche Hello Richard,
I missed out on this one. Lovely p... Jan 30 16, 02:06 
Arnfinn G'day.
Enjoyable poem.
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