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 Nov 12 15, 22:25
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 Nomad  Posts: 6 Joined: 7-November 15 Member No.: 5,289 Real Name: Adam Hughes Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Eira  |
Tonight my prayers
are a house built with the bones of birds. Tonight the stars roar their gravity somewhere beyond our ears. Tonight the wind is louder than God has ever been. I never see the dew fall but every new sunrise my feet are wet. |
  
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Nov 15 15, 19:02
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Tonight my prayers
are a house built with the bones of birds. What a wonderful start to a poem. I just love this stanza. I'll have to return tomorrow as it's late here but feel this deserves my full attention. Eira ·······  ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner            |
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Adhamh MacAodh Separation (III) Nov 12 15, 22:25 
K.S. Lenk I read this poem before you edited it.
I miss the ... Nov 13 15, 13:26 Adhamh MacAodh Hi Krista, good to see you here. I think you'r... Nov 13 15, 13:38 K.S. Lenk I always enjoy your work.
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