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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
From the Logarhyme "poetic forms practice" thread in Karnak Crossing click here:
Control The time has come, it's true, I'll need to take control, and then proceed to write a post that fits the bill and pleases me. It takes some thought, but soon I see past writer's ghost (which tortures me). I strive to reach coherent rhymes, and not beseech the ones who ask for clarity. Apologize? I've tried and then technologized the bloody task. It seems in this chaotic world where change is slow: my muse was hurled without a net-- mind's eye quicksand. Soon comes reprieve: I break the trap, grin and retrieve game, match and set.  Copyright © Lorraine M Kanter 27 July 2013 ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
  
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Oct 2 13, 03:43
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 Babylonian  Posts: 62 Joined: 30-September 13 Member No.: 5,188 Real Name: Keith Logan Writer of: Poetry |
Hi Lori,
What's not to like? A snappy logarhyme AND a poem about poetry and that contrary muse. I love it. Keith, the happy chappy |
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Cleo_Serapis Control Jul 27 13, 08:15 
Eisa Hi Lori
Just noticed this one - first in this for... Aug 7 13, 17:29 Cleo_Serapis Hi Snow,
Yup - first posting since reopening thi... Aug 8 13, 04:43 Maggie Hi Cleo,
I like it!!!
I haven't ... Aug 27 13, 20:45 Cleo_Serapis Hi there Peggy,
Thanks for stopping in! YES, ... Aug 28 13, 08:28 
Cleo_Serapis Gee thanks Keith!
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