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Oct 19 04, 16:06
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Mosaic Master

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Hi all.  Liz has permission to post this form here and I think it sounds like a FUN poetic style... Here's the scoop as stated on Poetry911: How could a simple six line verse with four iambs in first and second line, two iams in the third, then repeated again in the next three lines, not have been written before? Anyway, the form is: 4 iambs with end rhyme A 4 iambs with end rhyme A 2 iambs with end rhyme B 4 iambs with end rhyme C 4 iambs with end rhyme C 2 iambs with end rhyme B Where usually some kind of summary or counterpoint to the two preceding lines goes on the B line. Liz summarizes this new form as: QUOTE The requirements are iambic meter... Line Length is 884884 for each stanza the rhyme scheme goes AABCCB ... Its fun! Hugs, Liz Here is an example from Liz.... All In The Mind... The moon is full; an airy light encircles it this eerie night. A blood red ring. The strangest shadow passes by it floats across a blackened sky. What was that thing? I shiver; still I walk along and look about--the shadows gone. Afraid to see. There's an evil presence a foot a distant owl begins to hoot. It's calling me. When up ahead a witch on broom begins to fly toward the moon. A cackling caw. She screeched and scowled into the dark, it echoed through the streets and park. Her hand a claw. Her wicked hand reached out to me. she tried to grab hold of my tee. I raced away. I headed home, and slammed the door She could've followed, I'm not sure. Here's where I'll stay. The midnight hour had struck the clock at twelve...ding dong, had sung tick tock. What did this mean? I hid beneath the candy seat, and heard a voice say trick or treat... It's Halloween! Why not try it!
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Sep 28 13, 12:46
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Mosaic Master

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From: Massachusetts
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Real Name: Lori Kanter
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As time flies by, I’m caught—alas between two tasks. I shall not pass the buck. These eyes can see beyond the catacombs, inviting ev’ry one who roams to come, Arise! Pick up your pen, be one like Keats and make your mark; the muse entreats. Let’s start it here. Imagination comes, soon feel that beating march, spin on your heel away from bier that waits beyond, just to the right where junkets wreaking of ‘blocks’ night will dissipate. And when your written words--they'll read those critics long to intercede . . . It’s not too late.
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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the RingsCollaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. KanterNominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner 
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Cleo_Serapis Logarhyme Oct 19 04, 16:06 JustDaniel Ah, could be it be an occident
or just another pre... Oct 19 04, 17:26 Cleo_Serapis Excellent and a speedy reply Daniel~san!
Cool! I... Oct 19 04, 17:36 JustDaniel No one's surprised you've not the time
to ... Oct 21 04, 13:03 Cybele Hello everyone,
Looks like fun.
Just a quicki... Oct 22 04, 16:00 JustDaniel Hmmm, Grace has joined another form;
ya think ere ... Oct 23 04, 01:08 Cleo_Serapis Divine Traditions
There was a time when Druid... Oct 25 04, 18:53 Cybele Hello Lori,
This is just great.
Although we do... Oct 26 04, 03:17 JustDaniel You said it well, my buddy Grace,
but LogaRhymin... Oct 26 04, 07:30 Cybele Hi Daniel,
Now lookie ‘ere me yankee pal
yer ... Oct 26 04, 12:20 JustDaniel You've got me laughin' up a storm!
The... Oct 26 04, 13:24 JustDaniel I ain't done LogaRhymin' much;
ya think th... Jul 26 05, 12:48 Cybele Hi Daniel,
QUOTE I ain't done LogaRhymin' ... Jul 29 05, 06:03 JustDaniel Greetings, your Grace!
Please allow this land... Jul 29 05, 11:30 AMETHYST Kinships
My brothers been a vital part
of all th... Dec 26 05, 22:18 JustDaniel Grace's Home...
We's been away from her... May 3 06, 14:55 JustDaniel Ah, well...
Here's one from our first experie... Jul 10 06, 21:50 Cathy Hi Daniel!
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I don't remember childhood years;... Jul 22 06, 22:19  Cleo_Serapis Hi Liz.
Boy is this one hitting home! I must make... Jul 23 06, 06:20 AMETHYST Thank you Lori,
I haven't written anything in so... Jul 23 06, 17:55 JustDaniel "I don't remember childhood years"
... Jul 24 06, 07:49  AMETHYST QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Jul 24 06, 12:49 ) "I... Aug 6 06, 22:40 JustDaniel I’m ambling in the woods again
where I escape with... Jul 24 06, 13:24 Cleo_Serapis Vacation left some work undone,
so now is not the ... Jul 24 06, 15:59 JustDaniel Thirst Comes First
I'm pleased to find your v... Aug 7 06, 01:55  AMETHYST QUOTE (JustDaniel @ Aug 7 06, 06:55 ) Thi... Aug 7 06, 11:59   JustDaniel QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Aug 7 06, 12:59 ) .... ... Aug 7 06, 14:25 AMETHYST On This Night- Logarhyme
Tonight's the night, I ... Oct 5 06, 14:53 AMETHYST My shoeless ex in garbage stench
was sitting quiet... Nov 24 06, 10:41  JustDaniel That's quite a story, Liz, my friend;
I hope t... Nov 24 06, 15:50 jgdittier Dear All,
This is a real peach of a thread. I doub... Nov 4 09, 09:24 JustDaniel Too many months have passed since we
have played t... Aug 3 11, 09:15 Larry Hi Daniel,
I read this thread with great interest... Aug 29 11, 09:34 JustDaniel Dear Larry, you have started well,
and where you g... Aug 29 11, 13:48 Larry Thanks Daniel!
I'm so delighted that I go... Aug 30 11, 15:41 Larry Here then is my first real attempt to write a long... Sep 5 11, 16:35 JustDaniel Oar Again
I'm sorry that it took so long
for ... Jan 25 12, 10:41 Larry "He" Provides
It's sad that you mus... Jan 26 12, 16:34 JustDaniel We ran a mission right from scratch,
helped many f... Jan 28 12, 13:13 Larry You gave your all but more than that
you gave much... Jan 30 12, 16:07 JustDaniel Your words mean much to me, my friend;
this long d... Apr 6 12, 11:16 Larry In silence, we must contemplate
the choice of word... Apr 6 12, 15:14 JustDaniel There's much to eat that is not bland
though m... Apr 9 12, 08:01 Larry If that pie were mincemeat, I would choke
though I... Apr 13 12, 15:47 JustDaniel Who'd think our Larry would invent
another for... Apr 16 12, 11:50 Larry Retreat from innovative change?
Just thought I... Apr 17 12, 15:44 JustDaniel Iamb so sorry, Larry friend.
I hope my words did n... Apr 18 12, 14:41 Larry Let it fizz? Well gee-whiz, I had thought
there w... Apr 22 12, 00:42 JustDaniel The course is set with your new tile;
your variati... Mar 12 13, 13:47 Larry We’ll soar and hope that we won’t fail
to gain som... Mar 12 13, 15:04 JustDaniel Without a crit, some roses bloom
but most of us ne... Mar 12 13, 15:19 JustDaniel Here's one from last week's Flash Jam 97:
... Mar 25 13, 15:19 Larry Un-trans furred tail
If rhyme and beat, properly... Apr 1 13, 23:17 JustDaniel I've now repaired it, as you see.
I do not kno... Apr 5 13, 15:15 Larry You're not a psyche, Daniel my man;
although s... Apr 6 13, 18:52 JustDaniel Sometimes I simply make mistakes
as when my mental... Apr 6 13, 22:09 Larry I stumble too, when something's strange
but ma... Apr 11 13, 00:08 JustDaniel Good grief!!!
I'd just completed ... Apr 11 13, 02:36 Larry Sorry about that Daniel,
If you have MS Office... Apr 11 13, 08:26 JustDaniel Thanks, Larry. Unfortunately I was using VoicePer... Apr 11 13, 09:54 Larry To recreate; first, you will need
a comfy chair an... Apr 19 13, 10:28  Cleo_Serapis Hi Larry,
I haven't written one of these in l... Apr 26 13, 20:54 JustDaniel I fear that set is off somewhere
a-weepin' in ... Apr 22 13, 10:34 Larry This flatulence, which you emit
while in a funk ab... Apr 26 13, 17:49 Larry Hi Lori, I don't mind at all. In fact, I like... May 2 13, 16:32 Cleo_Serapis Oh my!!!
I hope this isn't a sign... May 4 13, 17:06 Larry It’s been so long that I forgot
to answer back. I... Jun 6 13, 23:47 Cleo_Serapis Well done Larry!
I'll be back soon to re... Jun 7 13, 07:04 Larry Not a Sound
It’s been a month since I have heard
... Aug 6 13, 13:58 Cleo_Serapis Thanks for the reminder Larry - SWAMPED at work ge... Aug 7 13, 11:36 Cleo_Serapis Hi Larry,
Reply #1...
The Gnome's in Town ... Aug 9 13, 12:54 Larry Better Late Than Never
Another week has gone... Aug 16 13, 15:23 Cleo_Serapis I know Larry.
What has happened? Things were doin... Aug 16 13, 15:48 Larry No Belfry - "tweaked"
As laughter’s tre... Aug 28 13, 22:54 Cleo_Serapis Ha ha ha~!!!!!! Very funny... Aug 29 13, 08:08 Cleo_Serapis Hi Larry - a few thoughts:
QUOTE No sleep was had ... Aug 29 13, 08:55 Larry Hi Lori,
Sorry it's taken so long to get back... Sep 3 13, 13:11 Cleo_Serapis Hi Larry,
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I would not jeer nor would ... Sep 5 13, 16:32 JustDaniel My inseam's taut because my pants
are stretche... Sep 7 13, 20:05 Larry It would be most ideal but age
has crept upon us, ... Sep 26 13, 21:59 Larry It’s not too late to enter seeds
into the ground, ... Sep 29 13, 23:41 Keith Logan This, if memory serves was the original logarhyme.... Oct 3 13, 18:48 Cleo_Serapis Oh - how lovely!!! Were you the one wh... Oct 6 13, 11:17 Keith Logan Around 10 years ago and more I did my rhyming on s... Oct 7 13, 15:14 Larry Love’s Call
Though soul was fed when roaming ceas... Oct 11 13, 14:08 Keith Logan Hi Larry,
Great and thoughtful response. It's... Oct 11 13, 17:05 Larry Hi Keith,
Thanks for the clarification. I liked ... Oct 11 13, 22:04 JustDaniel To write a poem here is fine;
non-Logarhymes are o... Oct 12 13, 16:17 Keith Logan Daniel, thanks for the head's up.
the happy ch... Oct 12 13, 21:38 JustDaniel I'm looking to the Day when pain
will nevermor... Oct 13 13, 10:20 Keith Logan Jehovah's witnesses are they
who teach that su... Oct 13 13, 20:22 JustDaniel Jehovah's Witness I am not,
but I believe what... Oct 14 13, 10:08 Keith Logan Just Daniel yes, I was misled
by the form of hopes... Oct 14 13, 18:35 Larry And off upon a tangent, new,
of lighter mien which... Oct 15 13, 14:01 Keith Logan On a lighter note, here's an old one that will... Oct 15 13, 17:36 JustDaniel Dear Writer's Block
Dear writer's block, ... Oct 17 13, 10:32
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