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 Jun 20 13, 18:23
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 Ornate Oracle  Posts: 9,097 Joined: 27-August 04 From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia Member No.: 78 Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:David Ting  |
UPDATE: AS of July 6th (last day for submissions), Sergio has opted to have a different poem from a different board submitted this month. Best of luck!
Hi Lori!  I would like to nominate Sergio's (saore's) poem "Madness" for July's IBPC. Here's the link: Madness Madness by Sergio Ortiz Weeping muse... you make me fall into a thick misty river, the tundra where my poems gather. Madness enters on the wind, the jolt of a wild animal thrashing from a spasm, its eyes seek mine in despair. O my first dead— Which winter squall carries my disordered pages, the shroud of tears we will inhabit, the gravesite where all spit their epitaphs? I think it's a deftly written, delicate piece on the subject of muses and madness, reminiscent of some of Plato's thoughts, but in modern day language. Cheers, Syl***  ·······  ·······Mis temas favoritos
The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. "There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction." Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! MM Award Winner              |
  
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Jun 23 13, 07:51
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
This one was sent into the staff forum a few days back by Sylvia (Psyche):
QUOTE Hi Lori!  I'd like to nom Maureen's poem "Not Quite White", FV for the next IBPC, whenever that is. I believe the link is: Not Quite White. NOT QUITE WHITE by Maureen Clifford White was nice, white was bland, white was not a colour. God, he was sick of white – neutral white – blank palette white. White overalls, white dustsheets. Everyone was the same, like bloody sheep following the leader. They all wanted white. Where were the blues, the pistachios, cerise and aubergines? When had white become the go? Safe old white – cold white. Icy white, white out, antique white. What’s right with white? He sat under the filtered light from the skylight, smelt the fresh plaster, noted the grain in the timber banisters soon to be painted white and as he stirred and stirred the colours deepened, became strong and vibrant. Alive. He smiled. Surrounded by glass he stood viewing the panorama of nature's vibrancy. Green and blue, yellow buttercups, wild crocus and fluffy white clouds. He began to paint his walls... Not quite white. I have contacted Maureen. YAY! Congrats! ~Cleo
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner  |
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Psyche MM's Selections for July Comp Jun 20 13, 18:23 
saore Thank you Sylvia, I accept the nomination.
Serg... Jun 22 13, 08:02 Psyche Great! I think it's highly original. I... Jun 27 13, 02:56 Cleo_Serapis Best of Luck Sergio and Maureen!
~Cleo Jun 30 13, 08:10 Psyche Best wishes for IBPC, Maureen and Sergio!... Jul 1 13, 00:50 saore thank you, congratulation Maureen.
Sergio Jul 1 13, 04:51 Cleo_Serapis I've just received an email from David Ayers a... Jul 6 13, 12:26 Psyche Hi Lori!
I did nominate John McLeod's po... Jul 6 13, 14:54 Psyche Hi Lori,
I would like to nominate Daniel's po... Jul 6 13, 15:13 Cleo_Serapis Hi Sylvia,
Please start a new topic for each poem... Jul 6 13, 17:03 
Psyche Lori,
As I said, I didn't post them as a new ... Jul 6 13, 20:21 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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