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 Assyrian  Posts: 262 Joined: 4-February 09 Member No.: 756 Real Name: Robin DeWalt Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Winning Writer's web site  |
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A stick-figure family painted in bold primary colors is propped upon a child’s easel. Under the sanctuary of an oversized sun children run happily through green meadows with lopsided red flowers. While parents hold their quarrels Behind inflexible smiles; never allowing tears to ruin their masterpiece. ·······  ······· |
  
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Nov 4 10, 14:38
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Assyrian Posts: 262 Joined: 4-February 09 Member No.: 756 Real Name: Robin DeWalt Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Winning Writer's web site |
Hi Snow -
Thanks for stopping by. I usually just copy from WP and that program places caps on every line...thank you for catching it. I like your suggestions and will revise. What do you think about changing 'ruin' to 'smudge'? ······· ······· |
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Nov 4 10, 14:42
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
QUOTE (merle @ Nov 4 10, 19:38 )  Hi Snow - Thanks for stopping by. I usually just copy from WP and that program places caps on every line...thank you for catching it. I like your suggestions and will revise. What do you think about changing 'ruin' to 'smudge'? I have that problem with WP too! I like 'smudge' - it's more visual. Snow 
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merle Watercolor Dream Nov 4 10, 01:53 
Eisa Hi Robin
I like the underlying message in this on... Nov 4 10, 14:27 
sandiegopoet Watercolor Dream
A stick-figure family painted in... Nov 6 10, 11:26 
Psyche Hi Robin,
Yes, this poem has an undercurrent of p... Nov 11 10, 23:47 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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