My Uncle Jim Options

[Guest_ohsteve_*]

My Uncle Jim

I didn't want to see him lieing there,
dressed in his best suit. He didn't dress
like that I said. He wore jeans and plaid shirts
that smelled of old spice and licorice.

I cried when I finally was forced up
on the predeu, he had these spots and no one
would tell me they were from the disease.
I thought he was in the process of shedding skin.

I cried again when they took him from the room,
where are they going? I asked quietly.
To the grave yard; I thought that must be like
a prison, or a dump for lost uncles. I miss him still.

[Eisa]

Hi Steve

This is so touching - seen through the eyes of a child.

I think adults try and protect children by not telling them certain things, when they are less frightened if they know the truth. Children have such vivid imaginations!

I didn't want to see him lieing there,
dressed in his best suit. He didn't dress
like that I said. He wore jeans and plaid shirts
that smelled of old spice and licorice.

one query in L1 - should it be lying?

I cried when I finally was forced up
on the predeu, he had these spots and no one
would tell me they were from the disease.
I thought he was in the process of shedding skin.

A sweet, amusing thought!

I cried again when they took him from the room,
where are they going? I asked quietly.
To the grave yard; I thought that must be like
a prison, or a dump for lost uncles. I miss him still.

Very toughing ending - I miss him still.

I really like this one Steve
Eira