The View, Finally Something NEW Options

[AMETHYST]

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you haunt -
from shadows beyond,
that thick mist
where I lost you -

I walk along
cobblestone paths
toward the castle
you've prepared

cutting my way
through the fog
with the razor-sharp edge
of your memory.



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The View


you haunt
from shadows beyond,
that thick mist
where I lost you -

I walk
cobblestone paths
toward the castle
you've prepared

cutting my way
through the fog
with the razor-sharp edge
of your memory.

[AMETHYST]

Hi Snow,

I was actually contemplating omitting the entire 2nd stanza and leaving -

you haunt
from shadows beyond,
that thick mist
where I lost you -

cutting my way
through the fog
with the razor-sharp edge
of your memory.

What do you think of that? ... :)

Still no sign of an approapriate title yet -

Hugs, Liz