Group: Gold Member
Posts: 3,822
Joined: 3-August 03
From: Florida
Member No.: 10
Real Name: Elizabeth
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori Kanter
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you haunt - from shadows beyond, that thick mist where I lost you -
I walk along cobblestone paths toward the castle you've prepared
cutting my way through the fog with the razor-sharp edge of your memory.
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you haunt from shadows beyond, that thick mist where I lost you -
I walk cobblestone paths toward the castle you've prepared
cutting my way through the fog with the razor-sharp edge of your memory.
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Group: Praetorian
Posts: 4,599
Joined: 4-August 03
From: Birmingham, England
Member No.: 12
Real Name: Eira Needham
Writer of: Poetry
Referred By:Lori
Hi Liz
I've just been to Karnok and found your picture. I think this is a great idea!!!
I thought the title might have been a 'stand in'. I'm sure you'll find another soon.
Great work!
Hugs Snow
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Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way. Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin!
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