QUOTE (Cleo_Serapis @ Apr 14 10, 07:13 )


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I would add a beat to the last line - you could do so easily with "Georgie".
Fun read!
~C;ep "Read:
George hurried home for a nooner
When he was eclipsed by a lunar
Missing his mark
There in the dark
Poor Georg
ie instead faced a mooner
Thanks Lori
'rum