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post Feb 17 10, 00:27
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Crayons Don't Cry

Colored smudges on the table top
from the picture she drew, now hanging
by alphabet magnets on our fridge.

A typical drawing of a six year old;
stick figures of mom and dad,
her and baby sister.

Yellow flowers in front of a red house,
with a bee as big as a hummingbird.

Our house isn't red...

That's OK, I put smoke coming out
the top, but we don't have a fireplace.


Why do mommy and daddy have tears?
'Cause you're sad about nana dying.
Why don't you have tears?
'Cause I know, she's in heaven.

She went out to play, while thoughts
of red houses, fireplaces and heaven
soared with my afternoon tea.

Feb. 17, 2010
© Steve Pray
 
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post Feb 17 10, 03:56
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G'day Steve.

You must enjoy, as I do, the trust and acknowledgement that young minds
accept in answer to their questions.

This poem is typical and soo true to todays grandchild.

Every word written is an everyday experience. troy.gif

A most enjoyable poem mate. troy.gif


A couple of days ago Pam and my daughter Andrea went to Sydney to visit a specialist.

Andrea suffers from Cardio Myopathy and MS.

I was left, in their wake, to look after our grandson, Angus, '8Yrs, 9 in March.'

We were playing, Monopoly, not as a board game, as a card game.

In the card game there is a card 'Just say No',. When this card is acquired, If any other
player asks for any of the cards you hold, you play this card 'Just say No'.
and the raid on cards is thwarted.
Our grandson calls us Mama (Pam) and Papa (me).
I said to Angus, wouldn't it be fun to make a 'Just say No' card for Papa to play when Mama
comes home from Sydney.

His eye lit up and he said, Yeeeah.

He spent 15 minutes making the card on a blank 11B envelope, and I placed in my top pocket.
When Pam came home she asked me to feed the animals.
I played Angus's 'Just say No' card.
Pam read the card and we all had a good laugh, most of all Angus. troy.gif

It is little things like this that make life, so special, mate.


A great poem.

Made my day,mate.


John troy.gif


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- ohsteve   Crayons Don't Cry   Feb 17 10, 00:27
- - Peggy Carpenter Harwood   Hi Steve, Very touching poem!!! Bitt...   Feb 17 10, 07:52
- - ohsteve   Arnie/John what a wonderful thing to have happen, ...   Feb 17 10, 18:54
- - ohsteve   Peggy, I am glad the bittersweet came across, I wa...   Feb 17 10, 18:59
- - Psyche   OhSteve, I'm coming back here! You've ...   Feb 18 10, 00:07
- - Thoth   Steve This is such a beautiful and familiar sketc...   Feb 18 10, 23:40
- - ohsteve   Sylvia and Wally, I am very glad you both enjoyed,...   Feb 22 10, 21:03
- - hellfire   a truly endearing piece seen through the eyes and ...   Feb 24 10, 10:20
- - ohsteve   James, Thank you for reading and the kind words. A...   Feb 24 10, 19:45
- - Kay   Steve, This poem is so original. It was a joy to r...   Feb 25 10, 12:17
- - ohsteve   Kay thank you for reading and for you comments, it...   Feb 25 10, 23:21
- - Cleo_Serapis   Hi Steve, I enjoyed the simplicity of this one. T...   Apr 8 10, 18:39
- - 4rum   Few can see with the purity of a six year old. The...   Apr 11 10, 00:17
- - ohsteve   Thank you Forum for reading and your kind words. ...   Apr 11 10, 20:16
- - Peterpan   Hi Steve~ I just love it! Oh the trust and i...   Apr 12 10, 04:10
- - anaisa   Hi Steve, This is really sweet- I loved it. Grea...   Jun 9 10, 00:07
- - Ephiny   Hi Steve, This is so beautiful and so absolutely ...   Jun 9 10, 04:14
- - ohsteve   Bev, Thanks for reading and your kind words, yes i...   Jun 10 10, 22:46
- - ohsteve   Karen, thanks for reading and for your kind words,...   Jun 10 10, 22:52
- - ohsteve   Lucie. first welcome back to the MM fold glad to h...   Jun 10 10, 22:55

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