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 Sep 16 09, 16:32
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori  |
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Number of downloads: 6large eyes flutter among echinachea blooms - peacock butterfly ·······  ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
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Sep 16 09, 17:56
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 Babylonian  Posts: 87 Joined: 27-November 06 Member No.: 361 Real Name: Ross Baird Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Mysty |
Eisa: Beautiful picture..beautiful lines. One reall chincy comment: the first line has, I believe, only four syllables where in the haiku structure five are needed. "Large dark eyes flutter"? ace |
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Eisa haiku Sep 16 09, 16:32 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Snow,
Lovely picture is right! WOW!... Sep 17 09, 08:58 Larry Hello Snow,
Loved the picture and the haiku. I, ... Sep 17 09, 14:16 Cleo_Serapis I've also heard the syllables be referred to a... Sep 17 09, 15:10 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Snow,
I like the haiku, but don't particul... Sep 18 09, 07:51 Thoth Hi snow,
very inspiring, especially the photo... Sep 18 09, 08:39 ohsteve Snow very lovely picture and poem. I no longer bel... Sep 19 09, 20:12 
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