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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry  |
The Problem Is…
The problem is... the problem is… The problem is... that my damn problem won't go away. The problem is... the problem is real. The problem is with me morning and night. The problem is... The problem is... The problem is... What was I thinking? Dunno… Hmm… The problem is… the problem is… What was I thinking? The problem is… Geeez, I do have a big problem. What’s the problem? Dunno… Geeez I feel good. I’ve got no problems. John ·······  ·······Arnfinn
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Aug 8 09, 02:00
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Creative Chieftain Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
Yeah, Sylv,
I know the reason why. Well, it is better to write a poem like this while I can tap keys and sorta understand what the hell I'm writing. Thanks, Christine.   John 
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Arnfinn The Problem Is… Aug 7 09, 05:03 
Psyche Geez, Arnie, I'm envious! Aug 7 09, 14:48 ohsteve John, Problem? What problem... they say I used to... Aug 7 09, 20:10 Psyche Well put, Steve.
Ya gotta pay attention to frien... Aug 7 09, 23:17 Arnfinn Mate, hope things are a bit better for ya.
Mate, ... Aug 8 09, 02:15 Arnfinn Read ya loud and clear, Christine.
John Aug 8 09, 02:17 ace John:
Makes an excellent visual poem and ther... Aug 10 09, 17:04 
Thoth Of all the things I've lost - - -
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