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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Hi all,
Figured I'd jump in here and repost an old Haiku - it was titled 'Rainstorm' but I hear one isn't supposed to giv them titles... Have at it folks!  a koi tail
under the water lily rainstorm  ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Aug 4 09, 12:10
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Lori, I liked the first image even though it follows no set pattern. I am beginning to think that as Mark said we need a modern name for this sort of poem maybe waiku or swenyru for world wide haiku or senyru for the world... that this is a derivative of haiku and senyru with no set syllables or word count just an image in very consistent language. or maybe even Kuyu...hmmmm.
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Cleo_Serapis a Haiku reposting Jul 30 09, 19:09 
Cleo_Serapis A bit of a notation: this is considered "cont... Jul 31 09, 05:37 alice I much prefer the first one..more scope for creati... Jul 31 09, 11:35 Cleo_Serapis Thanks for dropping by, Alice...
Glad you enjoyed... Aug 1 09, 08:11 Eisa Hi Lori
I'm with Alice here - I like the firs... Aug 3 09, 18:37 Cleo_Serapis Hi Snow,
Nice to see you and THANKS for remindin... Aug 3 09, 19:08 
Cleo_Serapis Hi Steve,
Well, it is definitely under the 17 syl... Aug 5 09, 16:47 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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