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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 11,722 Joined: 15-June 07 From: Springfield, Louisiana Member No.: 446 Real Name: Larry D. Jennings Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Just wondered in.  |
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A musician named Oren returned from a trek through the hills when he learned that his violin shop was in flames to the top. Seems while Oren had roamed, fiddles burned. ·······  ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner       |
  
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Jul 28 09, 02:39
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
G'day, Larry. HA, an Italian, Limerick. aabba 55335 String Theory A musician named Oren returned from a trek through the hills when he learned that his violin shop was in flames to the top. Seems while Oren had roamed, fiddles burned. This is a delight, Larry. Dunno about the last line, i seemed to stumble. Though, I'm not the best reader of meter. No doubt, Ron or Alan will drop in for a look. Regards, John. ······· ·······Arnfinn
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Larry String Theory Jul 26 09, 09:47 
ohsteve Larry, good limerick, bad pun....lol.So many groan... Jul 26 09, 10:45 Larry Hi John,
Thanks for the visit and the read. Glad... Jul 28 09, 16:28 alice that'll teach him. loved it!
I have Irish ... Jul 29 09, 05:18 Altay The last line is a punch line. Oren's tragedy,... Jul 29 09, 10:46 Larry Hi Alice & Altay,
Thanks for the visit and th... Jul 29 09, 12:44 
ohsteve Larry, since you seem to like puns, do you like sp... Jul 29 09, 23:24 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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