HAIKU, DAFFODILS Options

[hellfire]

a heavenly feast
aromatic decadence
when daffodils smile

[Arnfinn]

G'day HF,

a heavenly feast
aromatic decadence
when daffodils smile


I like the images created.

Now look at this haiku: by Perdita Finn.


a fingernail moon:
all that is left in the sky
after the blizzard


Now, what has the poet created.

1st Identify the subject. Line one.
2nd define in a poetic way a central statement. Line 2.
3rd A final thought. Line 3.

Keep the above in mind using a syllable count of 5/7/5 then write your Haiku.

Not finnished yet.

1 write your Haiku. 2 Check the S/count (dictionary, Websters is a good choice).
3 Re-write and produce a poem that is a spiritual journey.
Haiku is one of the traditional arts of Zen practice, one must not deviate from the
spiritual essence of the poetry form. The poet should write Haiku as a type of
thoughtful meditation.

Rgards,

John