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 Greek  Posts: 698 Joined: 29-May 06 From: US East Coast Member No.: 185 Real Name: Peggy Harwood Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:just wandered in  |
Windy Bill (metrical revision)
Windy Bill was a cowboy from Butte who so dearly loved beans and his flute. After chow he would blow from his head to his toe. Such a gassy old flute-tooting coot! Peggy Carpenter Harwood Windy Bill (Original) Windy Bill was a cowboy from Butte who dearly loved beans and his flute. After chow he would blow from his head to his toe, that gassy old flute-tooting coot! Peggy Carpenter Harwood ·······  ······· |
  
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May 5 09, 19:26
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Ha ha ha Peggy!
 I think I might have one solution for your metrical issues - please see below... Windy Bill was a cowboy from Butte who so dearly loved beans and his flute. After chow he would blow from his head to his toe, such a Enjoyed! ~Cleo 
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Peggy Carpenter Harwood Windy Bill (metrical revision 16 May 2009) Mar 22 09, 05:15 
ohsteve Peggy, Wonderful ROFLMAO... this is my smile for ... Mar 22 09, 14:40 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Steve,
I'm so glad you liked it!!... Mar 23 09, 20:44 ace Peggy:
Like Steve...love it.
Naturally two... Mar 26 09, 15:34 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Ace,
Thank you so very much for reading and co... Mar 26 09, 23:19 Arnfinn G'day Peg
Whoooeeee. He He.
Got a... Mar 28 09, 04:56 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John,
Ha! So glad you enjoyed it!... Mar 28 09, 09:42 Psyche HAHAHA....Peggy!!!! Great limerick... Apr 22 09, 19:53 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Syl,
I'm so glad you like it!! I ... Apr 24 09, 11:22 Marc-Andre Germain Peggy,
This is a well-crafted limerick. I've ... May 5 09, 10:18 Peterpan Hi Peggy~
Do you see how you get all the males go... May 6 09, 04:19 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi folks,
I'm sorry I am so late responding a... May 16 09, 04:03 Cleo_Serapis YAY Peggy!
I think this is it - the rhythms... May 16 09, 07:52 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Cleo,
Thanks so much for your help!!... May 16 09, 08:17 Larry Hello Peggy,
Verrrrry funny. I love a good limer... May 16 09, 13:51 
Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi Larry,
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