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 Greek  Posts: 743 Joined: 3-February 09 From: Abingdon, Oxfordshire,UK Member No.: 754 Real Name: Leonora Wyatt Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:No one at all  |
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Spring loosens moist earth, letting the sharpened leaf spears stab the infant Sun ·······  ······· |
  
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 4,599 Joined: 4-August 03 From: Birmingham, England Member No.: 12 Real Name: Eira Needham Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Hi Leo
I think you are getting the hang of these very quickly. I love this!!!! - and the surprise aha! in the last line is superb. Snow 
······· ·······Live one day at a time -it's simpler that way.
Laugh loud & often - it's medicinal. Write from the heart - it's therapeutic. Beauty comes from within - the outer is just skin! Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here! MM Award Winner            |
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Sekhmet Assassins Mar 7 09, 05:35 
Arnfinn Hello, Leo.
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Spring loosens moist ear... Mar 7 09, 23:25 Sekhmet Hi John! You are absolutely right. Assassins... Mar 8 09, 03:49 
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