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 Mar 7 09, 05:35
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Spring loosens moist earth, letting the sharpened leaf spears stab the infant Sun ·······  ······· |
  
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Mar 7 09, 23:25
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 Creative Chieftain  Posts: 2,587 Joined: 9-August 03 From: Australia Member No.: 17 Real Name: John Writer of: Poetry |
Hello, Leo.
Assassin Spring loosens moist earth, letting the sharpened leaf spears stab the infant Sun Very imaginative nature story. Has a biblical, Moses, ring about the Bullrushes (son). I notice there are a few spears involved. Should the title be Assassins Regards, John ······· ·······Arnfinn
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Sekhmet Assassins Mar 7 09, 05:35 
Sekhmet Hi John! You are absolutely right. Assassins... Mar 8 09, 03:49 Eisa Hi Leo
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