Air to a Summers Day, An Oxynation. Options

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Revision 5.40:pm 26th September 2008



Air to a Summer's DAY



Summer: silent steps with gentle feet
and from flowers bees buzz merrily.
Creatures clothed in pigments that deceive;
dissolve into nature's wonderland--
where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek.







Air to a Summers DAY


Summer: steps with gentle feet
and from flowers, bees buzz merrily.
Insects sporting pigments that decieve
fade into coloured petaled chambers.
Where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek.
repeat
Where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek.



John

[Arnfinn]

Hi, Peg


Nah, I want a pause before 'and'.

I put the postraphy in nature's.

I checked out 'Air'.

Qoute: Crudden.

It usually denotes a song (qv), tune or melody, or all three.
Frequently used in the late 16th c. and during the 17th when many
collections were published.
Cowper suggests the general sense, when, in A Winter Walk at Noon
he writes.

There is in souls a sympathy with sounds;
And, as the mind is pitch'd the ear is pleased
With melting airs, or martial, brisk, or grave:
Some chord in unison with what we hear,
Is touch'd within us, and the heart replies.


John.