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[Arnfinn]

Revision 5.40:pm 26th September 2008



Air to a Summer's DAY



Summer: silent steps with gentle feet
and from flowers bees buzz merrily.
Creatures clothed in pigments that deceive;
dissolve into nature's wonderland--
where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek.







Air to a Summers DAY


Summer: steps with gentle feet
and from flowers, bees buzz merrily.
Insects sporting pigments that decieve
fade into coloured petaled chambers.
Where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek.
repeat
Where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek.



John

[Arnfinn]

G'day Steve,

Summer, mate.

I left a word out of the first line.

'silent'

Nah, think i'll leave the and in (9)

This is my revised version.


Summer: silent steps, with gentle feet, (9)
and from flowers bees buzz merrily. (9)
Creatures clothed in pigments that deceive; (9)
dissolve into natures wonderland, (9)
where blows a hot wind to kiss my cheek (9)

jOHN