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Arnfinn SUMMER'S DAY - Haiku [revised 23 Sep 2008] Sep 19 08, 01:53
Thoth Hi John, Apart from the extra syllable in L1, it ... Sep 19 08, 06:04 Cleo_Serapis Hi John, I'm thinking you might want to find... Sep 19 08, 08:44 Arnfinn Hi Wally, Extra syllable in line one? Aphids/ i... Sep 20 08, 07:13 Arnfinn Hi, Lori The first lines Ok, no extra syllable. ... Sep 20 08, 07:19 Cleo_Serapis Hi John, Moved the poem for you. We count Aphids ... Sep 20 08, 08:27 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John, Could you say, "Aphids in white coa... Sep 20 08, 19:01 Arnfinn Nah, Better explain. This haiku is written in alp... Sep 21 08, 00:52 Peggy Carpenter Harwood Hi John, My goodness! This sounds quite comp... Sep 21 08, 09:03 Cleo_Serapis Hey Peggy, the problem is universal : in Australia... Sep 21 08, 12:18 Arnfinn Hi Peg, Nah, you have to believe in my veracity, ... Sep 22 08, 02:03 Arnfinn Hi Lori, I knew you would agree with the rationa... Sep 22 08, 02:22 Cleo_Serapis Hi John - getting there with this one. Instead o... Sep 22 08, 06:01 Arnfinn Well there's a lot of plum trees in Japan. ... Sep 23 08, 02:13 Cleo_Serapis Hi John, If you're asking me, I prefer : bli... Sep 23 08, 05:32 Arnfinn Ok. Aphids in white coats. Hot summer's b... Sep 23 08, 05:55 Arnfinn I appreciate your comments, Wally. Mutch bette... Sep 26 08, 02:02 Sekhmet Hello Arnfinn - I like your aphids in white coats ... Mar 7 09, 11:55 Arnfinn G'day, Leonora. White coated aphids Suckin... Mar 7 09, 23:08 ohsteve John, G'day mate, looks like you have this one... Mar 7 09, 23:19 1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
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