Summers Day [revised 06 Sep] Options

[Arnfinn]

With thanks to Lori.

Revision 18/09/2008


Footsteps: tread gently.
Bees a-buzzzzzzzzzzzz.
Aphids in white jackets.
Flowers; confusion of colour.
A hot summer's breeze-
on my cheek.



Revision 6th September 2008


Footsteps; tread gently,
bees a-buzz,
aphid's in white jackets,
flowers, confusions of colour.

A hot summers breeze-
on my cheek.



REVISION. AS summers day 4/9/2008


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i neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeever promised YYYYYYYYYYYYYou a Rose Garden.

john


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Arnfinn

[Cleo_Serapis]

mate!

This is really coming along nicely for such a short poem, John.

Well, you've got the required elements here if you shoulddecide to post a challenge - include summer's breeze, aphids, confusion of color, footsteps and bees. I could post something for October's Pandora if you like - let me know.

~Cleo