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Jan 8 08, 16:00
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Ornate Oracle

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From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia
Member No.: 78
Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
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SECOND REVISION GAIA
To unwind, to dream, beneath the canopy of a willow-tree! I wander your prairies, Gaia, picture sunflowers smile at summer skies, charting the sun’s orbit till nightfall.
Vast terrains pretend to slumber, guarded by languid owl-eyes stalking slinky felines and other unseen creatures of night.
I sleep beneath my leafy umbrella as frogs croak the onset of dawn, heralding showers flirting with rainbows. In dreams I circumnavigate mountain lakes, sight naissance of rivers.
I recite poems that nobody wrote, wondrous words dormant in memories of the dead. I gaze at Gothic cathedrals, the Taj Mahal, Roman aqueducts dominating Italic olive groves, Alexandria’s library perished beneath the sea.
Libelious lies and carnage disrupt my trance.
Where has love gone, where the chubby toes of children? Why does blossom wither by waysides? Nuclear submarines inflame sapphire seas…
I've shared hope with shipwrecked migrants, blending homage and heartache. I am a refugee seeking a fresh life, or just life... I dream the dreams of all men.
I conjure up dust-bowls on Austral steppes, Amazonia gutted by russet roads, thawing glaciers thunder Andean slopes.
Ice cubes tremble in my crystal tumbler, as I offer a toast to Gaia, to mystery, unreason, riddles, the paradox of her existence in space-time, to reality.
Reality is the destruction I have caused her. It is mourning a death foretold, though Death is not her death but mine.
By Psyche
Copyright: Sylvia Maclagan, Buenos Aires, Argentina, 2007.REVISIONGAIA
To unwind, to dream, beneath the canopy of a willow-tree! I wander your prairies, Gaia, picture sunflowers smile at summer skies, charting the sun’s orbit till nightfall.
Vast terrains pretend to slumber, guarded by languid owl-eyes stalking slinky felines and other creatures of night. I sleep on beneath my leafy umbrella, even as frogs croak the arrival of dawn showers flirting with rainbows. In dreams I circumnavigate mountain lakes, sighting naissance of rivers.
I recite poems that nobody wrote, wondrous verses dormant in memories of the dead. I gaze at Gothic cathedrals, Taj Mahal, Roman aqueducts dominating Italic olive groves, Alexandria’s library perished to the sea.
Libelious lies and carnage disrupt my trance: Where has love gone, where the chubby toes of children? Why does blossom wither by waysides? Nuclear submarines inflame sapphire seas… I share dreams with drowned sailors, blending homage and heartache. I am a refugee seeking a fresh life, or just a life... I dream the dreams of all men.
I conjure barren austral steppes, Amazonian forests fissured by red roads and far-flung thawing glaciers.
Uneasily rattling ice-cubes in a crystal tumbler, I offer a toast to Gaia, to mystery, unreason, riddles, the paradox of her existence in space-time, .................................to reality.
Reality is the destruction I have caused her. It is mourning a death foretold, though Death is not her death .................................but mine.
By Psyche
Copyright: Sylvia Maclagan, Buenos Aires, Argentina, 2007.ORIGINALGAIA
To unwind, close my eyes, to dream, beneath the canopy of a willow-tree! I wander your prairies, Gaia, picture sunflowers smile at summer skies, charting the sun’s orbit till nightfall.
Vast terrains pretend to slumber, guarded by languid owl-eyes stalking slinky felines, hares and other creatures of night. I sleep on beneath my leafy umbrella, even as frogs croak the arrival of dawn showers playing at rainbows with the sun. In dreams I circumnavigate mountain lakes, sight naissance of rivers.
I recite poems that nobody wrote, wondrous verses dormant in memories of the dead. And then I gaze at Gothic cathedrals, at Taj Mahal, at Roman aqueducts dominating Italic olive groves, at Alexandria’s library perished in the sea.
Libel, lies and carnage disrupt my trance: Where has love gone, where the chubby toes of children? Why does blossom wither by waysides? Nuclear submarines inflame sapphire seas…? I share dreams with drowned sailors, blending homage and heartache. I am a refugee seeking a fresh life, or just a life... I dream the dreams of all men.
I conjure barren austral steppes gasp at far-flung thawing glaciers, Amazonian forests fissured by red roads, while I uneasily rattle ice-cubes in a crystal tumbler. I raise my tumbler and offer a toast to Gaia, to mystery, unreason, riddles, the paradox of her existence in space-time, .................................to reality.
Reality is the destruction I have caused her. It is mourning a death foretold, though Death is not her death .................................but mine.
By Psyche
Copyright: Sylvia Maclagan, Buenos Aires, Argentina, 2007.
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner 
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Jan 13 08, 11:22
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Ornate Oracle

Group: Praetorian
Posts: 10,653
Joined: 27-August 04
From: Bariloche, Argentine Patagonia
Member No.: 78
Real Name: Sylvia Evelyn Maclagan
Writer of: Poetry & Prose
Referred By:David Ting

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Yes, Linda, less is more... in this year and age! You're probably right. I confess that I read classical literature in preferance to new stuff; just finished Dostoviesky's The Brothers Karamazov and now started The Tenant of Wildfell Hall, by Anne Brontë!!! The same goes for poetry, not that I'm going to compare myself with classical poets...haha...I'll see what I can do, Linda, thanks for dropping by.
HA. Man or Nature? That is the question.
Hugs, Sylvia
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Mis temas favoritos The Lord replied, my precious, precious child, I love you and I would never leave you. During your times of trial and suffering, when you see only one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you.
"There is no life higher than the grasstops Or the hearts of sheep, and the wind Pours by like destiny, bending Everything in one direction."
Sylvia Plath, Crossing the Water, Wuthering Heights. Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!MM Award Winner 
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Psyche GAIA [revised 20 Mar 08] Jan 8 08, 16:00 Xanadu IMO this could use some editing. Kind of "les... Jan 9 08, 14:07 Cleo_Serapis Hi Sylvia,
Love the title and content here! ... Jan 19 08, 10:32 Psyche Hi Lori!
Thank you for your detailed crit ... Jan 21 08, 10:32 Psyche Hi Lori!
At last I've done my homework ... Jan 30 08, 09:42 Cleo_Serapis Hi Sylvia,
I foind it again! I had wanted to ... Mar 18 08, 16:48  Psyche Hi Lori!
Here I am, so happy to be nomina... Mar 19 08, 10:15 AMETHYST Oh my Sylvia,
I adore the visuals and the contex... Mar 19 08, 08:33  Psyche Oh my Liz...LOL... I'm always so pleased when ... Mar 19 08, 10:28
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