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post May 16 07, 18:53
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Let us sing of the godling boy

for he was blue-eyed beautiful. He gurgled glee
and let his laughter lilt and spill upon the ground.
His smile would make the morning gold and slow the sun.
He held us hard in chubby fists of ecstasy.

Yet when he died, I read what the autopsy found:
both orbits held rogue stars and his damned heart had spun
its drug-filled life inside a mirrored cavity.


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post Aug 26 07, 16:45
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Maybe the strongest emotion of all is grief. You have spoken with great emotion and great grief. I'm touched by the depth of your sorrow, but marvel in your ability to reach out.

Wonderfully expressive. Congratulations on your most well deserved award.

Sam


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