 August 2007 IBPC Nominations, September Competition |
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
Hello,
I'd like to nominate Mistral's Enchanted Forest for it's gentle style, imagery and rhythms. ~Cleo  Enchanted Forest by Mistral Mystical trees in silhouette against a starlit moon; luminous, the scattered beams - beguilingly they're strewn. Casting soft, a speckled glow on shrubs and gentle stream where lovers lie, entangled there, immersed within a dream. Dappled moonlight's glimmering reflects in loving eyes, wispy breeze through lucent trees bequeaths contented sighs. Spellbound forest moulding here this perfect lover’s nest, where doubts and insecurities are gently laid to rest. ·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
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Aug 20 07, 00:33
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 Greek  Posts: 532 Joined: 4-September 03 From: Northwest Coast Member No.: 29 Writer of: Poetry |
This is lovely, smooth and lilting. A great nomination. I haven't had the pleasure of reading this before now. The ending is my favorite. Good writing.
my best, Michelle ······· ······· |
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Cleo_Serapis August 2007 IBPC Nominations Aug 10 07, 08:16 
Psyche Lori, may I nominate Michelle's Ghost in the M... Aug 10 07, 12:25 Cleo_Serapis Wow, what a fascinating poem, Sylvia!
I'l... Aug 10 07, 13:18 Cleo_Serapis I'd like to nominate 'Captive Bred' by... Aug 13 07, 07:32 AMETHYST I would like to nominate Lovers Meet Again for the... Aug 15 07, 23:11 AMETHYST I would like to nominate Grounded/Limitless for th... Aug 15 07, 23:20 AMETHYST I would like to nominate Yoked for the fresh and o... Aug 15 07, 23:31 AMETHYST I would like to nominate The Hoboes Abode for bot... Aug 15 07, 23:43 AMETHYST I would like to nominate this poem, Resilience f... Aug 16 07, 07:40 Cleo_Serapis Hello! Judi has nominated Merlin's poem, O... Aug 16 07, 08:37 AMETHYST I would like to nominate this poem, Mrs. Hobbit f... Aug 16 07, 11:22 Peterpan I second this...did you know Tolkien was born in S... Aug 16 07, 12:20 AMETHYST I would like to nominate this poem, Ripples rippl... Aug 16 07, 17:26 AMETHYST Thanks Bev, Yes I think anyone who would read this... Aug 16 07, 17:30 Merlin I'm truly honored, and many thanks, Liz.
I di... Aug 16 07, 18:22 Merlin My morphing into a writer of free verse is taking ... Aug 16 07, 18:25 AMETHYST Hey Merlin, What is Frances doing with herself the... Aug 16 07, 18:30 AMETHYST Ahhhh ... I have my cyber pen in hand! :) HAHA... Aug 16 07, 20:15 Cathy Thank you for the nomination Liz! Aug 17 07, 07:22 AMETHYST It is well deserved ... and lots of work went into... Aug 17 07, 07:34 AMETHYST I would like to nominate this Sonnet, Verdict for... Aug 17 07, 07:37 Cleo_Serapis Thanks so much Liz!
I humbly accept (especial... Aug 17 07, 08:56 Nada Lott Thank you very much, Liz -- I am deeply pleased an... Aug 17 07, 09:58 AMETHYST I love this poem ... for my own personal reasons..... Aug 17 07, 10:20 Michelle I'm glad that his was nominated. I read this ... Aug 19 07, 22:20 Michelle Stopping by to cheer for this one. I love it too.... Aug 19 07, 22:24 Michelle Wow, I missed this one in the forum. Excellent to... Aug 19 07, 22:28 Michelle Gosh, I missed this one in the main forum too. Th... Aug 19 07, 22:32 Michelle Hi Terry. I'm so glad this was nominated. I ... Aug 19 07, 22:48 Michelle Here is another poem that I thought was excellent ... Aug 19 07, 22:56 Michelle I would have bet that you had nominated poem, Merl... Aug 19 07, 23:03 Michelle Lovely Merlin. I especially like how the end twis... Aug 20 07, 00:25 Michelle I've had the pleasure of reading this one befo... Aug 20 07, 00:27 Michelle This is an exceptional poem, Snow. I'm glad i... Aug 20 07, 00:29 Cleo_Serapis Hi Michelle,
I'd be honored if you offer a cr... Aug 20 07, 05:20 Merlin In the event this heads on, pls change 1 line in V... Aug 25 07, 10:35 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Eric and best of luck!
~Cleo Aug 29 07, 05:12 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Sue and best of luck!
~Cleo Aug 29 07, 05:13 Cleo_Serapis Congrats Michelle and best of luck!
~Cleo Aug 29 07, 05:14 Michelle Hey Lori, I got your pm. I'm ecstatic. This ... Aug 29 07, 06:29 Cleo_Serapis Eccellent Michelle - I've made the revision fo... Aug 29 07, 17:57 heartsong7 You all have been so gracious in you encouragement... Aug 31 07, 18:12 
Cleo_Serapis Excellent Rev Sue.
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