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Lanturne
The lanturne (or lanterne) is a five-line light verse evidently derived from Haiku and shaped like a Japanese lantern (hence the name) with a syllabic pattern of 1 2 3 4 1 syllables. Sometimes described as a half-cinquain there seems to be no particular requirement for subject matter, though the original intention may have been a statement of nature. Generally, each line is a self-contained statement, such that the poem is not merely a sentence arbitrarily divided into syllables. Some suggest that the form should begin with a noun, with line 2 giving an action or description of the noun and lines 3 & 4 each giving a further description, and the 5th line offering another word for the noun, though not necessarily a synonym or even a noun. The form may or may not have a title, but it can be an integral part as the ‘sixth line’ of the poem. snow
adrift covering ice where it may fall © MLee Dickens'son 25 Feb 2005 nose sensing what eye can’t seeks to acquire skill © MLee Dickens'son 22 Feb 2005 naught I ’ d r e a d echoed sense to comprehend aught © MLee Dickens'son 27 Feb 2005 food for thought sleep eschews leaves quickly with morning's break fast © MLee Dickens'son 24 March 2005 ·······  ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Oct 20 06, 08:14
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knight's wet
rain falling empties clouds leaving his dreams damp © MLee Dickens'son 20 Oct 2006 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Oct 21 06, 14:57
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 You have tempted me to try one on for size!  Please critqiue and teach me how to make them stronger! Home longing safe refuge family, friends hearth ······· ·······Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here!
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Oct 22 06, 10:38
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,911 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
What is there to improve, Liz?
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mentor critiquer par excellence bard ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Oct 22 06, 12:02
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This looks like a lot of FUN
 Daniel.All the examples are excellent (yours too Liz)! I also think this is like a 1/2 Cinquain.  Here's my attempt at this form: Souls Samhain celebrate faith's sacrifice dead Wonder if I should change 'dead' to 'ghouls' ? ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner   |
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Oct 22 06, 17:27
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,822 Joined: 3-August 03 From: Florida Member No.: 10 Real Name: Elizabeth Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori Kanter |
Thank you for that nice compliment Daniel. I miss those cinquain threads we use to have... and this is a pretty interesting form to enjoy like that...
Hugs, Liz QUOTE Liz mentor critiquer par excellence bard Skill teacher meter mused in Daniel's hand craft Hi Lori... QUOTE Souls Samhain celebrate faith's sacrifice dead This is very powerful. I would say it would work quite well for the introduction to Holiday poems of the same theme, and or seasonal poetry for Autumn! :) This is a very strong example, is this your first one? ... Hugs, Liz ······· ·······Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here!
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Oct 22 06, 17:47
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QUOTE (AMETHYST @ Oct 22 06, 18:27 )  Hi Lori... QUOTE Souls Samhain celebrate faith's sacrifice dead This is very powerful. I would say it would work quite well for the introduction to Holiday poems of the same theme, and or seasonal poetry for Autumn! :) This is a very strong example, is this your first one? ... Hugs, Liz Hi Liz. Yes, this was my first Lanturne. I had All Hallows Eve on my mind.  Thanks for your lovely compliment!  Here's another:
Leaves tumble ground cover speckled sienna... Fall and another (these are fun) Witch broomstick pentacle casting of spells charmed  ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Oct 22 06, 18:31
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,911 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Addiction has begun!
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flipping turn yellow 'neath dog-ear'd tale book ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Oct 24 06, 15:14
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Miz who is creative not miscreant Beth ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Scares
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Jun 17 07, 11:49
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Buds
flourish blanketing stems with dappled blooms ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jul 1 07, 17:39
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,911 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
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l bright lanturnes will soon light Elizabeth's porch ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Jul 1 07, 19:05
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,822 Joined: 3-August 03 From: Florida Member No.: 10 Real Name: Elizabeth Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori Kanter |
Ah ... Yes, I did try one on for size! Thank you Daniel for the lovely light to brighten my entry!
I will have to do a few more of these ... Best to you, Liz ······· ·······Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here!
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Jul 1 07, 19:21
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,911 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
You're welcome. I'd noted that you were about to review the params for the form, so I thought I'd offer another flicker to spark your re-entry!
hang a round till the dawn has lit upon yew Lightly, Daniel 
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May 23 08, 09:41
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Bulbs
blossom garnishing nature’s palette Spring ······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Jun 11 08, 19:12
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 3,822 Joined: 3-August 03 From: Florida Member No.: 10 Real Name: Elizabeth Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori Kanter |
Hey Lori,
This is very vivid. I liked how L1/L5 off set one another, bulb/spring and how you've allowed each line to grow into a whole image. For a very short form, you've painted a very crisp picture. :) Nicely done. Hugs, Liz ······· ·······Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more details, click here!
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Jun 12 08, 05:32
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Thanks Liz - I've posted this one for crits over at Shogun's if you have any further thoughts.
Cheers ~Cleo 
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Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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lips
provide impression poet needs back talk © Daniel J Ricketts 26 Feb 2005 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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sparse years spread out 'twixt our responses now ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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form
the sounds to make words reveal your light style ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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work
requires focus-time but don't forget fun ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Hot
Summers contravene, like tails wagging dogs. ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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the heat with a fan; see the dog's tail wag © MLee Dickens'son 2012 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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By way of acknowledging Will.I.Am of the Hot Chilli Pepper's creative use of his forename :
Dan.
I.El lights lanturnes at drop of hat bright Alan ······· ······· |
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hats
cover ideas that need the light share ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Share
old words with others, rearranged by thoughts. ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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Mind
and heart understand what lips never say. ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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TRUTH
say what's dared/ what is true/ gotten away with Alan ······· ······· |
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Ornate Oracle Posts: 19,911 Joined: 2-August 03 From: Southwest New Jersey, USA Member No.: 6 Real Name: Daniel J Ricketts, Sr. Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori |
Just a reminder, from the opening page of this thread, re 'lanturne': QUOTE Generally, each line is a self-contained statement, such that the poem is not merely a sentence arbitrarily divided into syllables. Some suggest that the form should begin with a noun, with line 2 giving an action or description of the noun and lines 3 & 4 each giving a further description, and the 5th line offering another word for the noun, though not necessarily a synonym or even a noun. The form may or may not have a title, but it can be an integral part as the ‘sixth line’ of the poem. snuffed lanturne
bard hanging strung out words a death sentence choked © MLee Dickens'son 2012 ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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brood ice-teased with steeped words the poet's thoughts pour ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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pores
exhude cool bodies waist removal sweat ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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spires
reach up touching hearts iconic aim point ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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at sky fluffy clouds followed by rain see ? Alan ······· ······· |
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sea
whispers good morning announcing hi tide ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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fessled imprisoned done up in knots dyed or tried in car serrated metal prison cell Alan ······· ······· |
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Sell
your lure telephone applications cost or dyed in wool sheep's clothing do not fit wolf's bane ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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wool
over the girl's eyes made the wolf think baa ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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baa
humbug I tell you fest'ring season scrooge Alan ······· ······· |
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scrounge
borrow solicit something might help work ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
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Apr 22 12, 09:09
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shave
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Apr 22 12, 12:28
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Apr 22 12, 18:26
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pur
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Apr 23 12, 10:07
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Fate
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 23 12, 10:21
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now
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Apr 23 12, 11:52
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Apr 23 12, 15:51
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cocaine for nostrils to be useless soon ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 24 12, 08:57
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sewn
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 24 12, 09:09
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Apr 24 12, 10:05
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wound
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 24 12, 11:18
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Apr 24 12, 11:51
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Apr 24 12, 12:37
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Apr 24 12, 17:10
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sleep
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 24 12, 17:49
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paws
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Apr 25 12, 04:07
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Apr 25 12, 16:36
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come on friend Alan; honor the form please? ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 26 12, 09:23
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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ayes
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Apr 26 12, 13:12
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 27 12, 08:22
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smash
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Apr 27 12, 08:56
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 27 12, 09:36
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Apr 27 12, 16:30
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 27 12, 17:54
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facts
scream out of someone greater than I somewhere ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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Apr 30 12, 00:23
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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Apr 30 12, 02:42
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Apr 30 12, 09:14
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truth
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May 1 12, 03:52
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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May 2 12, 08:58
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dump
deeply and you'll choke on an out house breath is equally true, no ? Alan ······· ······· |
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May 2 12, 10:47
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breath
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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gnomes
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foul,
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bird- flipping? I am shocked!  second version fine ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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impost won't break you dig down deeply pay ······· ·······Slow down; things will go faster!
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pipers filling bags before kilties squeeze ······· ·······When power leads man toward arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the areas of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of his existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.
John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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John Fitzgerald Kennedy Kindness is a seed sown by the gentlest hand, growing care's flowers. Larry D. Jennings MM Award Winner |
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whorls
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prince
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