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Apr 22 13, 09:18
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word verbose sumptuous periphrastic jest
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Apr 22 13, 11:19
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gust of wind knocked me down; I heard Larry's voice!
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Apr 22 13, 14:31
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choice to speak or whisper above Daniel's storm
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Apr 22 13, 14:48
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stern
language
from my friend?
that could never
be
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Apr 22 13, 14:57
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be at peace. give and take rarely evens out.
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Apr 22 13, 15:08
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out
your friend ?
he may in-
jure you later
on
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Apr 22 13, 15:13
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on and on he travailed a thousand smiles trip
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Apr 22 13, 15:18
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trip over your own foot - two short of one yard
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Apr 23 13, 02:21
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yards or miles all the same : unattainab- le
Alan
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Apr 23 13, 10:58
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le- verage maintains in- divivisible 'turnes
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Apr 23 13, 13:04
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sync wanes when one uses bifurcated rifts
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Apr 23 13, 13:44
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sniffed poems are stinky if nose is turned up
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Apr 25 13, 09:11
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up antes when writing form poetry down
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Apr 25 13, 10:03
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down the page go poems with no comments shared
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Apr 25 13, 16:08
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share in forms over here crits and comments there
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Apr 25 13, 17:59
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there has been more critique in recent days thanks!
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Apr 26 13, 17:44
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thanks to you there is life in the old bones yet
Alan
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Apr 26 13, 17:53
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yet we need a few more to right this ship. write!
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Apr 26 13, 23:57
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right, our right is to write; it's our rite to crit
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May 1 13, 09:13
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crits enhance what some deem need polish to shine
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