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 Jul 30 06, 14:53
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 Mosaic Master  Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep  |
QUOTE (Rosemerta @ Jul 30 06, 15:50 ) [snapback]79995[/snapback] Hi Lori, Thanks for the time spent going through this. I am always in much need of help with punctuation. It also brought this up and I noticed I had missed a few posts. QUOTE One note of personal opinion: I would not make the word ‘poet’ capitalized unless you also capitalize the colors following ‘Poet’. This is a wonderful suggestion. I hadn't thought about it that way. As you see, I haven't been keeping up with making revisions. I need to make time someday soon to sit down and go through all the works I have asked for help on. I've had so many wonderful suggestions from everyone that I need to put them into use before they are accidentally lost. Thanks for the input.  Glad to be of service Jackie.  It's easy to overlook page 2, 3 and 4 and so on but I always do that since there are more frequent posts these days and one might miss one if we don't look back...   I can also help you with the nifty 'search' tool as well if you need to locate your works to keep your files in order... Cheers! ~Cleo 
·······  ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here!  "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner           |
  
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| Guest_Rosemerta_* |
Aug 4 06, 12:21
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Thanks Lori,
Sorry I'm slow to reply. My service has been down for a few days. I finally figured out the search a little but any tips you have will be welcomed. 
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| Guest_Rosemerta_* |
Oct 29 06, 19:13
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Hey there Cleo:wave:
QUOTE I can also help you with the nifty 'search' tool as well if you need to locate your works to keep your files in order... Cheers! ~Cleo I guess I hadn't figured out the search as well as I thought. I could only find a few. Is there a way to see where all your posts are? Also, is there a way to see all the work of someone else if you wanted become more familiar with their range over time? Thanks -- Jackie/Rosemerta |
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Oct 29 06, 19:32
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
QUOTE (Rosemerta @ Oct 29 06, 19:13 ) [snapback]86248[/snapback] Hey there Cleo  I guess I hadn't figured out the search as well as I thought. I could only find a few. Is there a way to see where all your posts are? Also, is there a way to see all the work of someone else if you wanted become more familiar with their range over time? Thanks -- Jackie/Rosemerta Why hello Jackie! No worries.  Give this method a try: If you click on your 'Rosemerta' hyperlink name (or anyone's for that matter) - it will bring you to your profile page. In the upper right hand corner, you'll see: PROFILE OPTIONS with a pull down arrow. Click on the second choice "FIND MEMBER'S TOPICS". This search tool will display only TOPICS you have posted. Yours is currently 2 pages long, but from there you can click into each topic and then use 'download this topic' from the OPTIONS poull down to the right of each topic (but you'll have to click into each topic one at a time). Then just back arrow to go to the next one in the list and so on...Good luck! ~Cleo 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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Oct 30 06, 05:38
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Laureate Legionnaire  Posts: 3,446 Joined: 16-October 06 From: UK Member No.: 298 Real Name: Alan McAlpine Douglas Writer of: Poetry Referred By:Lori/Eisa/loads of old friends |
Dear Jackie,
Can't comment on the whole poem, but I would suggest that you amend your title to The Poet's Palette I checked, the spelling you use is fine, but the first thought that comes to my mind with that spelling is a rough wooden base on which industrial goods are carried on trucks, whereas palette is more specifically to do with paints and colours. This might be a USA/UK thing, but palette covers both, while pallett does not. Love Alan ······· ······· |
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| Guest_Cathy_* |
Nov 6 06, 07:45
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Well darn! I just posted to this and when I clicked on 'Add Reply' to post it popped up to say I was responding to one of Lori's poems! No how in the world???? LOL
Oh well... the gist of what I wrote was that I was glad this had been pulled back up. I've always enjoyed it! I know sometimes punctuation isn't used but it sure makes it easier to know where the pauses are! *smiles* I have a tendency to run things together! Is there a particular reason why you didn't? Just curious is all. It doesn't overly affect the poem in this case, I'm just overly curious! LOL Lovely piece Jackie~ Cathy |
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Apr 15 07, 12:11
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Mosaic Master Posts: 18,892 Joined: 1-August 03 From: Massachusetts Member No.: 2 Real Name: Lori Kanter Writer of: Poetry & Prose Referred By:Imhotep |
Congrats Jackie on your (first) wizard award winning tile!
 Well done!   ~Cleo 
······· ·······"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step into the Road, and if you don't keep your feet, there is no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings
Collaboration feeds innovation. In the spirit of workshopping, please revisit those threads you've critiqued to see if the author has incorporated your ideas, or requests further feedback from you. In addition, reciprocate with those who've responded to you in kind. "I believe it is the act of remembrance, long after our bones have turned to dust, to be the true essence of an afterlife." ~ Lorraine M. Kanter Nominate a poem for the InterBoard Poetry Competition by taking into careful consideration those poems you feel would best represent Mosaic Musings. For details, click into the IBPC nomination forum. Did that poem just captivate you? Nominate it for the Faery award today! If perfection of form allured your muse, propose the Crown Jewels award. For more information, click here! "Worry looks around, Sorry looks back, Faith looks up." ~ Early detection can save your life.MM Award Winner |
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| Guest_Cathy_* |
Apr 17 07, 08:28
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Congratulations on your Wizard award Jackie! I've always admired this poem~
Cathy |
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