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Haiku is one of the most important forms of traditional Japanese poetry. Haiku is, today, a 17-syllable verse form consisting of three metrical units of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively.
Haiku (in English) usually appears as an unrhymed three-line verse. It should balance intense, fragmentary imagery with stress on rhythm and sound. Though it can be presented in three lines, a haiku structurally consists of two parts with a pause in between. The power behind it derives from the juxtaposition of the two images and the sense of surprise or revelation that the second image produces. A good haiku is like a good joke: the set-up, then the punch line.
In the broadest sense,Haiku is about Nature. In Japan, most haiku have a season word (Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, New Years) that links the poem with the vast, archetypal round of the Year of Life. Today, in place of the season word, some contemporary haiku poets use keywords that express common themes of human experience (for example, "mother"). This, however, is a matter of controversy in modern haiku.
Some examples of tradition Haiku are listed below by Japanese Poet, Kobayashi Issa for you to enjoy.
in falling rain one man remains... blossom shade
the cherry blossoms that stirred me, shade me no more
through falling snow a spring breeze blows
have you come to save us haiku poets? red dragonfly
Please feel free to add to this thread your own haiku.. Mosaic Musings Staff
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Cleo_Serapis Haiku Aug 3 03, 16:40 JustDaniel a chigger inserts
its pincers into flesh;
a rash o... Apr 16 12, 22:45 Larry Hi Daniel,
Your suggested change:
in darkness, ne... Apr 17 12, 09:30 Alan Earth's lovely fresh air
poisons plants and g... Apr 18 12, 10:47 JustDaniel Ah, Alan...
again you're making STATEMENTS ra... Apr 18 12, 13:22 Alan Dear Daniel,
I have not answered this because I h... Apr 23 12, 11:58 JustDaniel old man wheezes
in the morning air;
pollen alights Apr 23 12, 15:45 Alan dusk poem alights
rarely in deepest winter;
please... Apr 24 12, 09:17 Larry Spring hastens to pleas
Winter drags its icy feat
... Apr 24 12, 09:35 Alan Nature's falls and dyes
detail's in colour... Apr 24 12, 09:37 Larry Winter's pallid face
sunshine glistens with co... Apr 24 12, 10:37 Alan I see winter fangs
and slavering jowls of wolf;
bu... Apr 24 12, 11:13 JustDaniel writing on the wall
from a branch of ivy;
loose br... Apr 25 12, 08:11 Larry loose stone fall and break
rain washes the mountai... Apr 25 12, 08:34 JustDaniel cyclers continue
to damage dry wilderness;
tough t... Apr 25 12, 10:46 Alan cycling tough to train
forever round in circles;
r... Apr 25 12, 16:38 JustDaniel riding 'til the fall
he winters in the forest;... Apr 26 12, 04:31 Larry spring into the leaves
pyres built by winter's... Apr 26 12, 09:36 JustDaniel cushions for fall;
mushrooms grow in darkness
behi... Apr 26 12, 12:26 Larry hinds out by the horse
stop the hart from bleating... Apr 26 12, 13:30 JustDaniel red deer's face turns
to eye the hidden archer... Apr 27 12, 08:10 Larry guts vibrate from taunts
harsh words will sharpen ... Apr 27 12, 09:27 JustDaniel spittle grips foliage
slowly dripping down;
's... Apr 27 12, 09:47 Larry mucus it is not
frog eggs hang from foliage
mosqui... Apr 27 12, 15:35 JustDaniel mosquito on foot
does acupuncture;
blood-lust alit Apr 27 12, 17:37 Alan blood-lust alit
tonight spring fleas abound
human... Apr 30 12, 02:53 JustDaniel human sack of ice:
a dozen skiers fail
to jump a t... Apr 30 12, 15:05 Alan to jump within tent
is decidedly camp;
banished to... Apr 30 12, 16:11 Larry seas burnish and grind
sands sparkle with each new... May 1 12, 12:58 JustDaniel nothing is left
since evaporation;
up in the cloud... May 1 12, 18:29 Alan way up in the clouds
moisture gathers to make rain... May 2 12, 08:48 JustDaniel down in the draft
glides about the bedroom;
a torn... May 2 12, 10:06 Larry atoms' pull ceases
God's hand fills the vo... May 3 12, 07:13 JustDaniel star dares new birth
imploding in darkness;
black ... May 3 12, 07:51 Larry hovering blackness
child of creation's demise
... May 4 12, 15:28 JustDaniel feds on themselves;
policing regulations
by the ru... May 4 12, 22:38 Alan by the rule makers
shall ye be known, numbered
and... May 6 12, 03:15 JustDaniel haystack full of ticks
swarmed by guinea hens;
pro... May 6 12, 18:39 Larry Daniel got there first so I'll leave my answer... May 6 12, 22:43 JustDaniel steppes cloud the water
with a tinge of phosphorus... May 7 12, 07:37 Alan leaves a bitter taste
angostura cocktails
add spr... May 9 12, 08:25 JustDaniel springs on your feet
so you can dunk the ball ?
di... May 9 12, 08:32 Alan dis qualified
espert on de subjec'
done talk t... May 9 12, 10:02 JustDaniel dung stuck in hat
holds the nest together;
robin f... May 9 12, 10:48 Larry robbing feeds her young
hawk stands on fresh-kille... May 9 12, 15:37 Alan flies on eagle's wings
summer's sad casual... May 9 12, 16:08 Larry rowed over hilltops
terraces fall to valleys
rice ... May 10 12, 13:47 Alan rice fills empty bowls
full bowls fill empty stoma... May 10 12, 16:47 JustDaniel a well-seasoned
charcoal barbecue grill;
ready for... May 10 12, 17:29 Alan nature is ready
for spring and summer frolics
her... May 11 12, 00:46 JustDaniel a dangling limb
soon to be kindling;
a cold winter May 11 12, 08:11 Larry a cold wind stirs
leaves pile against tree trunks
... May 11 12, 14:12 Alan hibernation place
does not bear thinking about
it... May 11 12, 15:41 Larry warmer air endures
icy fingers dissipate
melting i... May 14 12, 13:48 Alan melting into sprigs
of holly, mistletoe droops
Chr... May 14 12, 23:37 JustDaniel crisp mass of clover --
intense summer sun
turns E... May 15 12, 09:22 Alan Eire never browns :
heat is reserved for debate
al... May 16 12, 00:05 JustDaniel showers dampened
her weekend party plans;
blossoms... May 16 12, 04:33 Alan blossoms are wilting
need to stay out of kitchen
d... May 16 12, 07:18 Larry a dandelion sloop
gentle winds guide fragile ships... May 16 12, 09:25 JustDaniel arbor's next year's food
for life within t... May 16 12, 10:19 Alan us book worms await
seasonal hibernation
curling,... May 17 12, 03:09 JustDaniel puddled red book worms
swarm on a magazine;
scratc... May 17 12, 06:28 Alan scratch and sniff the link
to long-buried memories... May 17 12, 16:32 Larry sun wore at venture
burning passions were melted
b... May 18 12, 08:40 JustDaniel beached pro-creation:
anti-evolution cruise
ends o... May 18 12, 14:08 Alan vodka on the rocks
summer cruise on the high seas
... May 20 12, 01:47 JustDaniel woodcock in the swamp
is hunting through the night... May 21 12, 07:58 Alan his long bill of fare
delineates flamingo
takes of... May 21 12, 12:28 Larry takeoffs in the sand
waves grinding seashells to d... May 21 12, 15:18 Alan stalls for lemonade
get you restarted real quick
A... May 22 12, 00:26 JustDaniel a mariner weighs
his crew's fish-net catch --
... May 22 12, 08:55 Larry extract the ink from
some frightened cephalopods
w... May 22 12, 12:09 JustDaniel with'ring from no eats
dry-throated robins cro... May 22 12, 12:16 Alan writing "Worms" - rejoice
Martin Luther ... May 22 12, 12:43 JustDaniel Christ-followers taught
to love one another;
the h... May 22 12, 13:31 Alan the heart of the law
more observed in the breach
t... May 22 12, 23:13 JustDaniel thin is in keeping
fat off of your frame;
butcher ... May 22 12, 23:48 Alan to butcher your pecs
you must never exercise
some ... May 23 12, 00:52 Larry Some things fit summer
others fall after springtim... May 23 12, 14:38 JustDaniel snow in winter
as a leaf in the fall...
tossed by ... May 24 12, 15:29 Larry teased by the wind
seasons change without warning
... May 25 12, 00:15 Alan toasted by the wind
blowing hot from the desert
bl... May 25 12, 01:24 JustDaniel color leaves as trees
cover their feet for winter;... May 25 12, 07:09 Alan heir conditioning
really must be at Eton
boaters o... May 26 12, 04:02 JustDaniel boats on the river
drift quietly in the wind;
wate... May 26 12, 10:15 Alan waterfall beckons
splash in ornamental lake
stone... May 26 12, 23:06 JustDaniel stones on the bottom
brushed by the rushing curren... May 27 12, 07:55 Larry markings in the sand
eternal waves susurrate
lulla... May 27 12, 14:51 JustDaniel Lulubelle has crabs
boiling on the stove top;
shel... May 28 12, 11:31 Larry she’ll offer a feast
field and forest teem with fo... May 29 12, 23:36 JustDaniel naturel de l'eau
for perfect french toast:
à v... May 30 12, 07:40 Larry a voyeur salutes
with both hands in his pockets
ay... Jun 1 12, 14:28 JustDaniel eyes cannot sense
all that a nose assays...
spring... Jun 4 12, 08:50 Larry a shoe in the spring
fish lay eggs in still waters... Jun 5 12, 13:45 JustDaniel afoot the mount
his horse plays with gentleness...... Jun 6 12, 08:01 Larry a yell and a scream
avalanche roars its reply
drif... Jun 6 12, 13:45 JustDaniel distant echo fades
into the canyon's depth;
a ... Jun 6 12, 15:51 Larry a wharf at midnight
undulates with the ocean
the t... Jun 15 12, 13:41 JustDaniel the tide waves goodbye
to our Ocean City week...
f... Jun 26 12, 07:42 Larry families bounding
creatures running for their live... Jun 29 12, 08:18
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