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Sep 2 14, 10:56
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no one buys its steaks so the butcher shop grinds them just to make ends meet
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Sep 2 14, 15:40
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just to make ends meet the snake swallowed its tail; hard to get a round
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Sep 3 14, 13:05
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a hard round to get is at last call for the road you might not get there
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Sep 3 14, 18:15
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yew are always there for the Christmas party; holly pines if not
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Sep 4 14, 10:18
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pine knots and holly fireplace is easy to light good sense and good scents
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Sep 5 14, 08:46
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pheasant has good sense to fly high into a tree; hunter can't see him
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Sep 5 14, 10:54
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can't see hunter's hem when he wears his camouflage is he dressed to kill
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Sep 5 14, 12:26
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Now that (senryu, as most of us have to create here!) makes me LAUGH, Larry!!
a bronzed toucan spent too much time in the sun; shed topside feathers
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Sep 5 14, 15:02
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topside showed feathers chicks flapped pink wings in the nest not ready for flight
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Sep 6 14, 03:35
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not ready for might the new Doberman nuzzles; time will be patient
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Sep 7 14, 12:16
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times will be patient they grind exceedingly small salt and pepper please
Alan
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Sep 7 14, 14:25
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sought pleas and prepared to regurgitate his food owlets move around
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Sep 7 14, 16:40
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howlers move around from a student tostudent teacher's hilarity
Alan
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Sep 7 14, 17:32
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peaches will rarely mature without pits; thinking is fuzzy
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Sep 7 14, 19:15
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thin king is fuzzy so his chin looks much larger close don't make a man
I know Daniel, another Faux-ku.
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Sep 7 14, 20:06
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(knot sew without a title, Larry)
dew clothes make the man lying on the lawn glisten; summer morning cool
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Sep 8 14, 13:29
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cool summer mornings are like warm winter evenings, same temperature
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Sep 8 14, 14:54
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ill-tempered rattler tried to take a wee bite; pulled up my zipper
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Sep 8 14, 23:57
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mice zipped but pulled up when they smelled something cheesy but wasn't gouda
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Sep 11 14, 14:59
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it wasn't gouda nor was it leerdammer but more like e-damn
Alan
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