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Aug 22 12, 11:19
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mammary drums a silent breakfast beat: come and get it
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Sep 5 12, 22:57
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common giddyup will make things run quicker keeping you abreast
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Sep 6 12, 12:06
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giving you a breast is what the doctor ordered... fifty percent off
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Sep 9 12, 23:11
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fifty were sent off bottles crash on rocky shores unread messages
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Sep 19 12, 07:19
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bright red messages from the fan-leafed maple... who will understand?
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Sep 29 12, 15:20
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a stand of willows leaves make ripples in the stream like a child's fingers
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Oct 2 12, 17:45
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a chilled finger in a black box of dry ice... points to Mafia
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Oct 4 12, 15:16
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points to Morpheus for helping me go to sleep no Roman around
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Nov 4 12, 09:03
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no aroma found... severed pointing finger once made a stink
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Nov 6 12, 10:38
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one is made a skink when the lounge lizards don't buy an old witch's brew
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Nov 16 12, 17:34
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old witch's brew lingers in the stale air... feel the evil
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Nov 20 12, 15:50
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I feel the weevil moving when kneading the dough old flours smell bad
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Nov 22 12, 12:40
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old-flower-smell baa'd by the dyed ewe in hiding... now the ram's dam
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Nov 27 12, 11:19
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the ram's dam is gnu will da' beast find her or just father in fodder
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Dec 1 12, 08:48
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further and further the shiny speck drifts away... daughter's airliner
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Dec 5 12, 11:04
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Daniel, This one was of an extremely personal nature. I'll try to answer it the best I can.
daughter's air lingers long after her departure perfume and mem'ries
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Dec 7 12, 15:40
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perfumed memory wafts from my pillow... wakened restfulness
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Dec 7 12, 23:07
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weekend restfulness fishing in a quiet stream sleeping on the bank
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Dec 9 12, 17:38
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slipping on the bank he fell right through the skylight; security check
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Dec 10 12, 00:32
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secure It a chick with hair and no neck to be an Addams apple
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