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Apr 9 12, 12:39
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My thoughts are with Daniel whose last two entries here of mind-blowing ability are fun
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Apr 9 12, 13:20
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our fun is in sharing insight in the process of focusing poetic thoughts in words
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Apr 9 12, 14:03
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"In" words would look outwards and could take in the world if they had sufficient out-reach or not ?
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Apr 9 12, 14:16
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oar knot keeps it on board; ya can't get up a creek without proverbial paddle... just down
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Apr 9 12, 17:15
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bust down all barriers to free speech, and love until overpopulation shuts up !
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Apr 11 12, 07:22
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chute's up to the window so you can be rescued from the fire that's already scorched your tail
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Apr 11 12, 08:26
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A tale tall elements based on firm foundation make for better induction : belief
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Apr 11 12, 10:09
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bee leaf 'neath which a hive begins to develop that will soon become a honey buzz-ness
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Apr 12 12, 16:22
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Buzz-ness has quite a thrill as barn-storming pilot dips his wings in final salute; sun sets
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Apr 13 12, 14:24
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Some set and do nothing. Others seem to work hard at something. Both accomplish the same thing.
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Apr 13 12, 15:59
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small things makes a big diff in the grand schemes of things or then again, maybe rain falls or not
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Apr 14 12, 10:06
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... or naught but wind and dust be found upon your palm as I come when your interest is due
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Apr 14 12, 13:37
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Iced stew hot seal chowder a main of defrosted white fish followed by delice of innards yum-my !
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Apr 16 12, 07:40
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mummy has come unwound; it's now taking lessons from Kanye West and Lil Scrappy to rap
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Apr 16 12, 09:25
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Toe wrap is for the gout from eating seal innards. Can you wrest a little scrap for my toes.
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Apr 16 12, 11:57
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my nose has been longing not from any lies that I've told but because it would like to stop sneezing
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Apr 16 12, 12:24
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Sneezing does for noses what much philandering did for Democrat presidents : in fame !
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Apr 16 12, 16:31
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In fain, he knows to run. When autogamic dust fills the air, Kleenex is the one I choose.
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Apr 16 12, 22:31
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eye chews at the pollen and tries to spit it out but it merely blurs the image on lens
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Apr 17 12, 14:51
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Lennon's vision was blurred looking into nowhere he lacked sane definitions but conceived
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